James and I in... The Incredi...

By PoppyKiouWasHere

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Have you ever wondered how would it be if you were in...The Incredibles? If not, you should read this story a... More

Author's Opening Note
Scene 1: The Beginning
Scene 2
Scene 3
Scene 4
Scene 5
Scene 6
Scene 7
Scene 8
Scene 9
Scene 10
Scene 11
Director's Comment
Scene 12
Scene 13
Scene 14 and Kendall's P.O.V.
Scene 16
Carlos', Alexa's, Logan's and Kendall's Points Of View
Scene 17
Scene 18
Scene 19
Scene 20
Sorry, that's not a scene!
Scene 21
Scene 22
Scene 23: The Fighting Scene
Scene 24: Impressions From That Adventure
Everyone's Points Of View
Scene 25
Scene 26
Sorry, that's not a scene! (2)
Scene 27
Scene 28
Scene 29
Scene 30 (Last Scene)
Author's Closing Note

Scene 15

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So... back to the family Maslow! They went to their room, put their costumes on and headed to 1F.

In 1F:

Girl: Let go of me! (Screaming to him).

????: Shut up! (Sreaming to her).

Girl: Please, help me! Anyone! You're not gonna get away with this! (She screams to him angrily).

????: Oh, you think? (He says with an evil smile).

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That's the part when, they enter 1F and what they see is tragic. The seiling damaged and someone tying a girl.

James Maslow: (to the villain): What do you think you're doing?

????: Oh, Mr. Incredible, I'm glad you joined the party! (evil smile).

James Maslow: Do I know you?

????: You should have known me! Let me remind you. '' I'm your #1 fan''.

James Maslow: Buddy! (he remembers).

????: My name was Incrediboy! (He shouts and pushes James to the wall). Now, I'm Syndrome, your #1 nemesis (evil laugh... this time).

James Maslow: Why would you hate me? Everybody loves me!

Syndrome: Well...

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*Flashback*

The scene in the building...

James Maslow: Fly home Buddy, I work alone.

*End of flashback*

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Syndrome: You hurt me with these words. So, I started thinking, why should I love someone who underestimates me?

James Maslow: I'm super sorry. Will you ever forgive me?

Syndrome: Never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Then, he ties James and he takes him and the girl in his helicopter and then, he laughs with his evil laugh and then he says to the rest of the family:

Syndrome: (evil laugh) You'll never see them again!

Poppy Kiouloglou: What do you want as ransom for them? (She asks angrily).

Syndrome: That won't be so easy, honey. (evil smile).

Poppy Kiouloglou: Tell me! (she demands).

Syndrome: Oh, I want you to give up your powers forever and let me find the chest which contains a crown.

Poppy Kiouloglou: Or else?

Syndrome: Or else, you won't see them again... alive. (evil laugh).

Poppy Kiouloglou: This is dumb!

Syndrome: Oh, for you, it might be dumb, but for me it's not! (he shouts).

Poppy Kiouloglou: Why?

Syndrome: Because, that crown is magic! When someone -like me- (he says pointing at himself) wears the crown, he gets the whole superheroes' powers and gives them to that person.

Poppy Kiouloglou: We'll get you! You're not getting away!

Samantha continues...

Samantha: Yeah, we got our friends here, who can help us! (she shouts).

Ian finishes...

Ian: Yeah!

Syndrome: Oh, really? You and how many more? (evil smile).

Samantha: 4 more! (she shouts).

Syndrome: Oh, you're a scary witch! I'm not afraid of you and your stupid friends! (he shouts angrily).

Ian: They're not stupid!

Syndrome: They're not stupid. (he mimicks Ian).

Ian: Stop it! (he shouts).

Syndrome: I've had enough! Time to go. I have revenge to take. Syndrome out! Auf Wiedersehen! (evil laugh)

Syndrome left in his helicopter.

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Poppy, Samantha Ian: We, got to find the guys and Alexa and tell them what happened.

Samantha: And ask them for help.

Ian: And tell them the truth, that we're superheroes, because I'm 100% sure they'll ask that.

Poppy Kiouloglou: Let's go.

Then, they all left to find the guys and Alexa.


That freak in the picture is Syndrome.





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