Manan Shining Star

By nifi777

1.2M 88.4K 7.8K

Story of true friendship, love, betrayal and innocences. Manik and Abhimanyu being best friends n brother by... More

Character sketch
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Note
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
New Cover Page
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Shoutout
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
New Coverpage
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Shoutout
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Pictures
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
New Story
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Pictures
Chapter 68 Part 1
Chapter 68 Part 2
Excellence Awards 2016
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Note
Note
Chapter 71 (A)
New Coverpage
Chapter 71 (B)
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Shoutout and A Note
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
New Story & Little Help
Note
Other Characters
Chapter 76 (A)
Chapter 76 (B)
Chapter 76 (C)
Chapter 76 (D)
New Story Alert
Chapter 77 (A)
Chapter 77 (B)
Chapter 77 (C)
Chapter 77 (D)
Chapter 78 (A)
Chapter 78 (B)
Chapter 78 (C)
Chapter 78 (D)
Chapter 79 (A)
Chapter 79 (B)
Chapter 79 (C)
Chapter 79 (D)
Chapter 80 (A)
Chapter 80 (B)
Chapter 80 (C)
Chapter 80 (D)
Chapter 81 (A)
Chapter 81 (B)
Chapter 81 (C)
Chapter 81 (D)
Chapter 82 (A)
Chapter 82 (B)
Chapter 82 (C)
Chapter 82 (D)
Chapter 83 (A)
Chapter 83 (B)

Chapter 34

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By nifi777

Nandini came out of the room she was walking downstairs

Nandini pov
Ayyiappa I have behaved so clumsy today. Never ever have a guy affected me how much he affected me even though I meet him for the first time. How will I ever face him I can't be sane around him. I just can't let his face get out of my head now. Ohh god this is so wrong. Why can't I think straight about him why m I getting these different feelings. Am I falling for him. NO NANDINI YOU CAN'T HE IS MARRIED,AND HAS A CHILD. Get a grip over your self n more over u just meet him today how can u fall for him. No I wish I never ever see him again please ayyiappa but what's this feeling it make my heart cry I want to see him everyday Ohh God this is so complicated. Arr..... No it's just an attractions.... yup because he is too handsome...... yes  so this will fade away with time... yup finally.... I m just attracted to him that's it.... got it u stupid heart...

She was continuously blabbering this all standing on the stairs.

Finally realizing this she moved down

Nan: where is bhai n mukti it's being long time now. Ayyiappa please help them I wish all things get's sorted between them.

Upstairs In Maria Room
Manik sat next to maria caressing her hairs to make her sleep.

Maria looking at her papa with sleepy eyes she wanted to ask him something before going to her dreamland.

Manik saw her starring at him n he very well knew what it meant so he asked

Man: What happened princess want to ask something ??

On which maria nodded

Man: ask na princess
He said knowing her inside out

Maria: Papa whyl you told maria to be friendz withl herl
She asked innocently

Man: why baby u didn't wanted to be friends with her???
Manik asked being astonished

Maria: beca (because) shel na is scarcyl
She said taking her hands near her face with her finger crumble n her lips pouting

Manik chuckled seeing her making this cute expressing n poke her nose on which she rubs her nosey in irritation

Maria: papa
She said frowning

On which manik laughs loudly

Man: I so want to eat u my baby
He say this n picks her up in his arms n kisses her cheeks continuously make maria giggle

Maria: papa I m sleepi
She say's rubbing her eyes

Man: yes sleepy head go to bed sleep well my honey plum may angel come to meet my angel.
He kissed her forehead

Man: n listen nandini is good be friends with her she is funny not scary kk???

Maria just nods as she will never disobey her papa

Maria: kk

Manik sit's there looking at maria face as she slowly close her eye

Manik thought : Nandini she is really funny man but has a clean n pure heart which I know she is just pure n innocent like a small baby. I mean she just blurt out whatever came to her mind. Ohh God this girl is so different she is mature as well as a kid. The way she handled abhi n the situation was quite impressive. Par I do affect her so The Manik Malhotra affect's Miss Murty this will be fun to tease her n look at her cute antics n her face expression😃 Well women's get affected by me because of my handsome cum sexy look par she is seriously different usually girls throw their self on me par she ohh god I m too attracted to her wow Manik Malhotra is attracted to a girl Great
And he chuckles at this thought.

Then he see's maria sleeping peacefully he pecks on her forehead, keeping the baby speaker n putting on dim lights he move out making sure she is sleeping peacefully.

Manik get's out of the room n he see abhi n mukti entering the mansion

He came down n see nandini standing near the stairs.

Manik stood besides nandini

Abhi n mukti were holding hands n smiling on seeing them nandini was too smiling

Manik self talk : ohh god her smile is so beautiful n so is she
He was looking at her with dreamy eyes

Abhi n mukti came n were standing infront of them.

Abhi: what's up bro
He said looking at manik who was looking at nandini being lost

Nandini looked at manik
On seeing her looking at him he realized n looked back at abhi

Man: So all sorted ???
He asked curiously

Mukti smiled looking at manik

Abhi : Yes bro but had to agree with lots of stuff to make up to her
He said thinking of the cooking thing n made a 'I AM SO DEAD' face

On which manik showed him thump

Man: All the best bro
He chuckled at him

Nan: ofcourse u will have to bhai. And my sister in law cum friend is the sweetest in this world.
She side hugged mukti on which she smiled n said thank u

Abhi: so what were you guys doing when we were out? ??

This question made nandini shocked and she looked at manik thinking what all clumsiness she had done

Manik smiled n replied

Man: maria n nandini were trying to be friends. As nandini really liked maria n wanted to get along with her

Nandini sighed

Abhimanyu jaw drop n so was mukti shock

Abhi: what did u just say
He said still getting the words registered in his head

Man: what's the matter bro
He too asked by seeing his sudden shock face

Mu: you just said nandu wanted to be friend with Maria really.
She asked again to make sure she heard right

Man: yes why r u two surprise ???
He too asked seeing their face wondering what's wrong

Nandini knew n was praying to her ayyiappa that her bhai does not say anything further.

Abhi: she is the one who run away from kids.  She like kids but from far away that's it. After that incident she always stayed away from kids.

He almost laughed remembering something

Man: now why r u laughing
He asked being amused

Nan: bhai don't
She warned abhi

Abhi didn't listen to her
Abhi: just remembered something

Man: what???

Abhi: arrey during her internship she had her duty in children ward so while treating a child he was crying being scared of injection

Nandini interrupted showing her eyes to him

Nan: bhai stop dare u...

She was cut off by manik

Man: then what
He asked curiously

Abhi: so because of his continuous crying she tried handling him par he didn't stop so she too started crying there although after something the kid stop crying but she was crying more loudly more than him that i was called to hospital to take care of her n to stop her sobbing n take her home.

Nandini palmed her face

On listening to this manik laughed out loud n so did abhi
While mukti tried to control her laughter

Abhi: her senior doctor never gave her duty in children ward ever again
He said between his laugh

Nandini was feeling so embrassed she looked at his bhai manik n mukti 😳

Nan: aisa kuch nai tha kk bhai stop exaggerating it.

Abhi: acha really navya had called me twice to ask me where I m as she too could not make u stop crying.

Manik on listening her name remembered something

Manik thought : I have heared this name recently

Man: navya as in

Mu: she is nandu best friend. Infact she is getting married soon next to next week

Manik self talk: Cabir is too getting married next to next week in Bangalore n her bride name is......what was it.....yup it was navya only.....is she the same girl....

He thought were cut off by abhi

Abhi: what happened

Man: nothing

Abhi: anyway nandu what made u make up ur mind to be maria friend
He ask controlling his laugh

Manik to was thinking of the incident laughing again n this time even mukti started laughing

Poor nandu was looking at them angrily😈😈😈

Nan: enough kk it just happened once so stop making fun of me.
She said making a angry pout

Abhi: acha kk mukti don't laugh nandu is angry.

He said trying to make a serious face but failed miserably.

Mukti kept a finger on her lip n nodded

Nandini looked at manik who was yet laughing
She glared at him

Man: ohh nandu u r so cute
He said smiling at her

Nandini blushed as manik called her nandu n cute which was cherry on the cake for her.

They shared a short eye lock

Which was broken by mukti

Mu:where is little one??? I wanted to meet her
She said looking around

Man: she went to bed was sleepy

Mu: ohh I wanted to meet her never mind next time
She said being abit sad

Manik changed the topic

Man : kk fine so u guys r staying here till weekend right. We will have fun
He said with excitement in his eyes

On seeing this Abhi face drop n this was notice by Manik

Man: what's the matter bro
He asked being worried.

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