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โ„๏ธ The Art Of Remembering | SILVER โ„๏ธ

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By TheGemmeCommunity

Reviewer: Peterpan2210

Author: MiniMoxx

Title: The Art of Remembering

Genre: (idek is "will make you sad" a genre?) New Adult

Total score: /100

Score Partition and Review.

Note: May be subjective to reader. These scores are simply a reflection of the particular reviewer's evaluation and interest.

Cover: 9/10

I don't know why but the cover seems very crowded to me. Like the font and the picture? It's crowded. The color scheme is perfect though.

Short Description: 10/10

I love that you didn't reveal the illness although that's kind of obvious from the title, but instead kept it as a fatal accident. So people think, "Oh what if it's cheating?" Like I did. And for people like who love to make themselves cry, I'd jump right into the book after reading the description.

Writing Style/ flow: 8.5/10

The book is very well written. But, I don't know if those were thoughtless errors, but some of the sentences just didn't make sense.

Character arc(s): 20/20

It's so good you make me want to be petty and give you a 0. But its really good. It's so good that I'm giving you 20 even though I hated who Addison ended up with.

Plot and originality: 19.8/20

Surprisingly well researched. Also, people don't touch Alzheimers as a subject very much, it's usually cancer or cystic fibrosis.

But, there's still plenty of medically driven romance plots in the universe. That's the only thing the 0.2 is off for. But of course, I do realise that there's not much scope for doing something that's absolutely entirely never been done in the romance genre before.

Grammar: 9.8/10

I don't think I found any mistakes at all. No subject verb agreement mistakes, no tense mistakes. Yeah, few thoughtless omissions of 'a' and 'the' here and there. But again, as I said, I don't think that was because of any fault in your grammatical knowledge.

Vocabulary: 10/10

Perfect.

Story Pacing: 4.8/5

Neither to slow, nor too fast, overall. But I do think that you killed off Everett way too fast.

Reader enjoyment: 5/5

Oh, I loved it and I hated it at same time.

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