The story I have to say was unique, not cliché which I admired. The book had this attachment, that I felt almost among the story, feeling the emotions of the characters. It opened another chamber of imagination in my mind, which got me thinking. I was pleased by every perfectly phrased sentence, as it was always meant to be like that, the book being well composed, Won my heart. It has one type of allurement, And I am waiting for the next chapter
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Cover: 10|10
I would say the colors matched together, creating an aesthetically pleasing cover, l liked how it is simple, but not boring, you nailed it!
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Blurb 7|10
The summary is also really poetic and beautifully written, but it doesn't tell what's happening, so the reader would not have an idea what the story is about.
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Writing skills: 8|10
I truly admired how you explained each word, which was memorizing. However, the reason to rate it 8 was the writing style. It looked like a poem or just a bunch of quotes, and less like a story.
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Flow: 8|10
The story is really good and I am looking forward to reading it all when it's finished, although there wasn't a background or anything about the characters, which can make a reader a little distant, and not relate that much.
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Grammar 3|5
Since you already mentioned English isn't your first language, but you did good, just a few grammatical errors here and there, you can get them fixed at our editing shop if you find any difficulties! :))
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Overall 26|30
This book has the potential to do good, and even you as a writer, there were just little problems here and there which I already mentioned, that I hope you'll look into. And also don't get discouraged by any words I or anyone says, take it positively, and I really can see this book doing great, I would also like to add I like how the names of the chapters are spelt out pinwheel.
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Good luck with your book! - Raven!
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