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❄️ YOU'RE MY ECSTASY | ALEX ❄️

Reviewed by: luminology

Book Title: You're My Ecstasy

Author's Name: Tuneofhisflute

Cover: 10/10

The cover is so beautiful! I love the field and the colors the two people are wearing. They just look so cute together!!!

Title: 5/10

The title makes sense and it's an eye-catching title, but it reminds me of those titles that everyone on Wattpad uses.

Blurb/Description: 7/10

The blurb is so creative and poetic. It really drew me in and made me want to read your story. However, your grammar didn't make sense in the blurb making it harder to understand the point you were trying to get across with your blurb.

Creativity and originality: 6.5/10

I loved the aspects you put into the story and the way you portray Siya's parents is done so well and really made me feel for her. It's also interesting how Danish plays the flute, something that feels more like a "nerdy" instrument but still acts like a player. That was so creative and really turned the stereotype in on itself. I also found it interesting how much religion plays into that. As someone who was raised Christian, I don't know too much about other religions and have not experienced what it's like to practice them either, but through your story I learned something new about Hinduism. However I found your story really similar to everything else on Wattpad. The main plot of your story was something really "typical" on Wattpad and was something that I had read a million times in different stories over the years.

Plot and Flow: 17/20

Your plot was fine. Overall it was such an adorable story, but I found it a bit boring at times and there would be parts that would drag and ruin the entire pacing of the plot. The story was good and besides that I don't have any other complaints about it except for the grammar. Your grammar and word phrasing threw the entire story off and distracted me from fully immersing myself in the story.

Character Development: 10/10

The characters were wonderful! They warmed my heart with how adorable they were and so cute together. An observation I noted was that they didn't really change too much in the end, which is fine, but this made me invested in the overall story.

Writing style, Grammar, spellings, etc.: 1/10

Your grammar threw everything off. While I liked your use of imagery and how descriptive and flowery your writing was, the grammar threw everything off. It was hard to understand anything and I needed to take an extra step to decode everything. While everything else was perfectly fine, your story at times was hard for me to continue reading due to the grammar.

Genre relevance: 10/10

This definitely fits into your genre!

Overall: 55.5/90

Your story was really interesting and the cover really drew me in, but your grammar was a complete turn off. In general, your story was a bit mediocre and was similar to everything else out there. There wasn't anything too unique about it. Besides that, I really enjoyed your characters and their personality which brought a smile to my face.

Tips – These are just friendly suggestions from one writer to another ~

I think it would be great for you to start working on your grammar! The biggest problem I had with your story was your confusing grammar, but once you edit your story, I think it would be 10000 times more enjoyable!