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๐•‹๐•™๐•š๐•ค ๐•ค๐•ฅ๐• ๐•ฃ๐•ช ๐•š๐•ค ๐•’๐•“๐• ๐•ฆ๐•ฅ ๐•’ ๐•ค๐•จ๐•–๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•˜๐•š๐•ฃ๐• ๐•’๐•Ÿ๐•• ๐•’ ๐•“๐• ๐•ช ๐•จ๐•™๐•  ๐•š๐•ค ๐•ก๐• ๐•ค๐•ค๐•–๐•ค๐•ค๐•š๐•ง๐•–... Mehr

prologue
character sketch
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
Avni's birthday
Avneil's engagement
wedding rituals
Avneil's wedding
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
New Character
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
A little clarity on Avneil's character
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
Avneil's 1st holi
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
Avneil's honeymoon - 1
Avneil's honeymoon - ll
Avneil's anniversary - 1
Avneil's anniversary - ll
Avneil's anniversary - lll
chapter 64
chapter 65
chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
chapter 95
chapter 96
chaptet 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
Reviews
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
chapter 116
chapter 117
chapter 118
chapter 119
chapter 120
chapter 121
chapter 122
chapter 123
chapter 124
chapter 125
chapter 126
chapter 127
chapter 128
chapter 129
chapter 130

chapter 102

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Neil gets shocked when he sees that Parth is here....And on seeing him, Avni releases his hand and moves away from him and go closer to Parth.

Neil sees her going...And sees that she goes to him and puts her hand on his shoulder and Parth turns to her and sees Avni....

Parth - avu

Avni - Tum yehan ?

Parth - haan bas aise hi aaya tha... par tum yehan ? Tum kya kar rahi ho yehan ? Akele aayi ho ?

Avni hears his this question And before she says anything, Parth's gaze falls behind Avni, and he sees Neil standing far away, where Avni had left him...

Parth - oh Neil hai saath me

Avni sees him and says

Avni - haan

Parth - accha fir chalo Neil wahan Akele hai....

Avni hears this and puts her hand in Parth's arms in friendly manner but Parth gets shocked seeing her action but doesn't say anything...

On the other hand, Neil sees how Avni is coming close to him with Parth by putting her hand in his arms....

he slightly bites his lips to control his emotions and looks away from them...Because no matter what happens, he wants to change, but that doesn't mean he can see her with someone like this... This way, Avni's hand can only be in his arms and thus she can only roam around with him.

He is getting jealous and it is common that where there is love, jealousy is common... but yes, the way of showing that jealousy is different....Healthy jealousy is good, but when jealousy turns into madness, it becomes harmful.

Avni and Parth come close to Neil and Avni sees how Neil is looking at the other side but not saying anything...
She smiles and then immediately leaving Parth's side she stands back next to Neil and Neil looks at her.....

Then Neil looks at Parth who is looking at him with a smile and Parth speaks

Parth - hello Neil

Neil - hello

Avni hears his calm voice and gets little surprised.

Parth - How are you ?

Neil - I'm good... how are you?

Parth - all good..Well it's good you both met here... I was getting bored alone.. Now Avu has come here so my boredom will vanish...

Neil hears this and slightly smiles....
He has understood this much now that both are just friends.....
and it has always been friendship from Avni's side.... but somewhere he used to feel insecure from Parth's side....
But somewhere he has now also understood that Parth will not come between them and Avni also only loves him..

yes his avni loves only him, if she doesn't love him then she never give him second chance to correct his mistake... But at the same time, he is still a little jealous seeing her with someone and this thing of his can end only with time and maybe with Avni's love, Because apart from that he has no cure for it.

While Avni sees Neil who is lost somewhere and she answers Parth's words...

Avni - Same thing goes for you too.. I was also getting bored.. Now you are here then I will not be bored anymore....

Neil hears this and he's repeatedly biting his lips, she means that she was getting bored with him.... he sees both talking like this and says...

Neil - Sorry to disturb you both but you both enjoy each other's company... Actually I have to make an urgent call, so I will come in a while....

Saying this, Neil was about to leave.. Thinking that when both of them would finish talking, Avni would come back to the car, till then he would wait for her sitting in the car.....Because somewhere he was not able to see that Avni should ignore him and talk to someone else...

But as he takes his steps to leave, Avni holds his hand... Neil looks at her and Avni speaks

Avni - jab call par hi baat karni thi aur kaam hi karna tha yehan aakar... to mna kar dete mujhe.. yahan lekar kyon aaye

Parth sees Avni speaking this and Neil sees her and speaks

Neil - aisa nahi hai... wo..wo main...
Parth is here to give you company... so enjoy your friend's time.... and anyway my call will be over in 5 minutes then I will come...

Avni hears this and says

Avni - But I have come here with you and Parth is here what does it mean...I want your company...

Neil slightly gets shocked hearing this.... and Avni sees his this face and says calmly

Avni - can't we three sit together and talk ?

Neil - but

Avni - No if and but... agar tum mujhe chhod kar gye to fir chale hi jaana, main ghar khud wapas chali jaungi...( she said angrily )

Parth suppress his smile seeing this side of Avni...

And at the same time Neil is not able to understand what Avni wants.... she has forbade him from talking to her..
She told Parth that she was getting bored before he came means she was getting bored with him but here now she doesn't want to let him go anywhere....After all, what does she want...

Wherein, Avni looks at him, who keeps on looking at her and Avni speaks

Avni - what happened... go back.. do your work, go call your urgent clients....
(She says this and turns to the other side angrily)

Neil looks at her like this and after some thought, he speaks

Neil - sorry

Avni hear his sorry and looks at him..

Neil sees her and says...

Neil - Sorry, I'll do whatever you want, but please don't get angry...

Avni looks at him by making a face that first you himself make me angry and then you tell me that don't be angry.....

Whereas Neil looks at her like this and speaks

Neil - Don't mind, but you could have said all this in a good way too... why do you always get angry and start scolding..?

Avni hears his this word and speaks

Avni - You don't understand anything without scolding

His mouth slightly gets open to says something but he's not able to say anything after this

And seeing their this things Parth suppress his smiles And there Neil notices that there is audience here too and Neil sees how Parth is suppressing his laugh seeing him getting scolded

Neil glare at him and seeing him looking at him like this parth composes himself and speaks

Parth - sorry sorry

Neil makes whatever face and Parth speaks

Parth - Sorry, but if both of you are done, can we sit somewhere... ? and if possible, have some food too... I am hungry after watching such a good show..

Neil gives him whatever look again after hearing this and Avni speaks...

Avni - and I want to eat panipuri.. (she speaks to Neil looking at him)

Neil - yehan ?

Avni - toh aur kahan ?

Neil - No, I mean, would it be okay to eat panipuri here? itni khuli jagah me thoda unhygienic nahi hoga...
I mean it's not good for your health....

Avni - what happened to me

Neil - you are pregnant

Avni - So I am pregnant, not sick..

Neil - haan wo to hai Par...

Avni sees him and says...

Avni - par kya...

Neil - If you want to eat pani-puri, then we can go to some good restaurant...

Avni sees him in disbelief and doesn't say much more than that...

Avni - you know what.... tum rehne do... tumse kuch kehna hi bekar hai... main akele jaakar khaa lungi

Saying this, she leaves both the boys there and starts going towards the panipuri stall...

Parth Neil look at each other and before this Parth takes his steps forward.. Neil goes after Avni before him...

Parth smiles seeing him and then he also goes after both of them.

Avni comes to Panipuri and tells the seller of Panipuri to make it very spicy Panipuri...Neil's eyes widen on hearing this and before this he speaks something, he gets scared from her glare....

He gets a little worried because he doesn't want Avni or their child to have any problem because of this...Already in the morning, she often feels nauseous.., if she eats outside food and junk food then her problem may increase...

At the same time, Avni tells both the boys one more time that if they both want to join her then they can...Neil politely refuses her, which somewhere Avni was expecting..But Parth eats panipuri with her and soon the process of eating panipuri turns into a competition...Parth and Avni compete to eat Panipuri and Avni tells the Panipuri seller to make it more spicy....

Neil widen his eyes on this...And he wants to stop her but he is not able to do anything even if he wants to...

And also he doesn't like the way both Avni and Parth were talking during their competition...Both were reminiscing their old college memories which Neil did not like...

And suddenly she choked and she starts coughing and also she starts feeling her mouth is burning due to spices....
Neil gets worried and immediately gives her water and caresses her back to calm her and then when Avni is normal then Neil speaks

Neil - theek ho ?

Avni nods yes but she still feels chilly

Avni - My mouth is burning

As soon as Avni says this, both the boys run in different directions to get something sweet for her...

As Neil leaves from there... Avni smiles seeing him going and thinks something.

Within moments both the boys come back and Neil speaks...

Neil - ye lo....( Neil brings candyfloss for her because it's almost 8 in the evening...that's why he don't give her anything cold )

At the same time Parth brings ice-cream for Avni which is her favorite and Parth also extends his hand to give it to Avni.

Neil sees Parth and he just expects her to eat what he has brought for her.

Whereas Avni sees two sweet things in front of her....And then she looks at Neil where today there is no anger and jealousy in his eyes as to why someone else has brought something for his wife while he is there and that too especially Parth...

Seeing this, Avni smiles and takes the candyfloses from Neil's hand and says thank you to him.

Neil smiles that Avni gave up her favorite ice-cream which Parth brought for her... and ate the things which he brought and this little thing gives him a lot of relief....

Earlier, there was only this insecurity in his mind that Avni gives importance to everyone more than him, but today Avni has removed this insecurity in many ways....

Today, even in Parth's presence, and after he tells her to spend time with Parth, Avni tells him that she wants his company.... And then she left her favorite ice-cream which parth brought and ate what he brought....

At first in Parth's presence he felt ignored, which might not have been the case before also, but his mind was clouded by insecurities.

And now all three are walking and Parth and Avni are talking but during this Avni does not leave Neil's hand even for a second, seeing which Neil is feeling good....

She is not talking to him but she's with him and she is making him feel that things which is a big things to him

And later after spending a good time all three come to the car while walking and Avni says

Avni - OK Parth hum chalte hai... bye

Parth - bye avu, bye Neil

Neil slightly smiles and nods his head on his bye

Neil opens the car door for her to sit but at the same time his phone starts ringing....

Avni sees him and Neil sees her after seeing his phone screen....and speaks

Neil - Just 2 minutes, is it really urgent..

Avni nods her head in ok ok and Neil goes a little to the side from there

Neil talks on the phone and Avni sits in the car and Parth stands there so that when Avni and Neil leave, he will leave after that....

And while Neil's call gets cut and he turns back, he sees Parth in front of him..

Parth smiles seeing her and Neil looks at her and Parth speaks.

Parth - If you don't mind, can I say something?

Neil nods

Parth - Can we be friend ? (he speaks while extending his hand towards him)

Neil looks at him and sees his hand and speaks

Neil - Am I worthy of your friendship?

Parth smiles and says

Parth - come on yaar.... Don't curse yourself that much now.... Everything will be fine....
You have done wrong, done very wrong but have not committed any crime...

Neil sees him....

Parth - And somewhere I'm the reason for whatever you did... so to fix that thing and to give me some relief too from that things... let's be friends

Neil slightly smiles hearing this and shakes hands with him, and as soon as he shakes hands, Parth hugs him which Neil also reciprocates.

And there Avni sitting in the car sees this scene, at first she is surprised to see both of them like this but then she smiles..

And then somewhere she thinks that her idea of ​​calling Parth here might have worked....
Yes, she was the one who called Parth to come here, because she wanted to test Neil's anger and jealousy, in which Neil succeeded....

Avni asks Parth to come here and make Neil jealous, to which Parth does not agree at first...Because he is afraid that Neil might do something wrong again in anger after seeing him with her....But when Avni tells him that she has no other way but to test Neil, he agrees to help her.

And coming here when all three meet... Neil is a little jealous But today he doesn't get angry but understand things, which gives relief to Avni and she starts believing that this time her nil is really changing....

And then there after all this, Parth also thinks why not extend the hand of friendship towards Neil and make everything right with him...

By saying sorry, Neil had tried to fix things from his side, so now it is his turn to extend the hand of friendship and end his enmity with Neil...

And with this thought, Parth befriends Neil.












To be continued.....

















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