สœษช๊œฑ แด˜แด๊œฑ๊œฑแด‡๊œฑ๊œฑษชแดษด

By Richaa_Sharma

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๐•‹๐•™๐•š๐•ค ๐•ค๐•ฅ๐• ๐•ฃ๐•ช ๐•š๐•ค ๐•’๐•“๐• ๐•ฆ๐•ฅ ๐•’ ๐•ค๐•จ๐•–๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•˜๐•š๐•ฃ๐• ๐•’๐•Ÿ๐•• ๐•’ ๐•“๐• ๐•ช ๐•จ๐•™๐•  ๐•š๐•ค ๐•ก๐• ๐•ค๐•ค๐•–๐•ค๐•ค๐•š๐•ง๐•–... More

prologue
character sketch
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
Avni's birthday
Avneil's engagement
wedding rituals
Avneil's wedding
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
New Character
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
A little clarity on Avneil's character
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
Avneil's 1st holi
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
Avneil's honeymoon - 1
Avneil's honeymoon - ll
Avneil's anniversary - 1
Avneil's anniversary - ll
Avneil's anniversary - lll
chapter 64
chapter 65
chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
chapter 95
chapter 96
chaptet 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
Reviews
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
chapter 116
chapter 117
chapter 118
chapter 119
chapter 120
chapter 121
chapter 122
chapter 123
chapter 124
chapter 125
chapter 126
chapter 127
chapter 128
chapter 129
chapter 130

chapter 89

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By Richaa_Sharma

Previous chapter continue...


Here in Khanna House, in the Same night....

Bebe leaves her room to check on Neil once weather he's eat and sleep or not...

She comes outside Neil's room and opens the door....his door is not locked....
Bebe comes inside and sees Neil sleeping in uncomfortable position on the bed.....
She comes close to him and sees that the food kept on the table of his bed side is untouched.

She sigh..... and then she touches him to correct his sleeping position But as soon as she touches him, she gets shocked when she feels that Neil's body is burning like fire.

Bebe - tillu....( Saying this Bebe touches his forehead which is burning)

Bebe - hey bhagwan ise to bukhar hai........bebe realizes this and calls Shweta and Prakash

Shweta and Prakash come to Neil's room hearing Bebe's voice and they also learn that Neil has a high fever....

Everyone is trying to wakeup him but Neil is not getting up.... It seems that he is unconscious.

Bebe - Prakash doctor ko jaldi call kar...

Prakash calls the doctor and the doctor reaches Khanna House in the shortest possible time..





On the other side

at Mehta House

Avni is still feeling restless and she is calling someone again and again but no one is picking up her call

Avni - bebe mera call kyon nahi utha rahi hai... unhone kaha tha ki wo Neil ko Check karne jaa rahi hai... kya abhi tak wo Neil ke room se lauti nahi hai...?
Neil theek to hai ? Kaise pta Karu...
Maa bhi call nahi uthaa rahi....

Avni thinks of all this and calls Bebe again....



Here at Khanna House

Doctor checks neil And he tells everyone that because of not eating anything, getting wet in the rain he has got this condition...

Neil is not conscious that's why the doctor gives him medicine through his veins.
He tells them that for the time being they keeps on putting and changing cold water clothes on his forehead, And if his fever does not subside by tomorrow morning, then he will do some treatment.

All gets scared seeing Neil suffering from fever like this.

Then Shweta wipes his body with cold water and then changes the cloth of cold water on his forehead again and again,
But Neil's condition is not improving in the slightest, but his fever is getting worse...


On the other hand at Mehta House, Avni finally calls Prakash when Shweta and Bebe don't pick up her call..

When Prakash gets Avni's call, it is 3 o'clock in the night... Shweta asks Prakash to see his phone ringing.

Shweta - Prakash ji is waqt kiska call hai ?

Prakash also gets shocked to see Avni's call at this time and he says...

Prakash - Avni putter ka call hai ?

Shweta - kya ? Avni ka call is waqt ?

While bebe hears this and says...

Bebe - jrur usne Neil ke baare me Jaane ke liye call kiya hai...

Shweta - Neil ke baare me Jaane ke liye ? Bebe, use Neil ke baare me kaise pta chala?

Bebe hears Shweta words and says

Bebe - Shweta use Neil ke baare me nahi pta..

Shweta sees bebe

Bebe - par kehte hai n jab do logo ke dil aapas me jude ho to fark nahi padta wo dur rahe yaa paas...unhe unke taklif ka ehsaas ho jaata hai... avni putter bhale neil se dur hai, us se naaraz hai par use neil ki fikar aaj bhi hai..

Shweta sees bebe

Bebe - usne pehle mujhe hi call kiya tha Neil ke baare me jaane ke liye kyonki use uski chinta ho rahi thi, aur tabhi main Neil ko dekhne aayi thi.... agar yehan aane me mujhe der ho jaati to pta nahi mera tillu... ( Saying this Bebe thinks that if Avni had not called her at the right time, and she had not come to see Neil, Neil's condition would have worsened...)

Shweta Prakash sees bebe and Prakash says...

Prakash - par bebe, main abhi kya bolu Avni putter ko...

Shweta hears this and speaks

Shweta - Prakash ji use Neil ke baare me btana sahi nahi hoga...
aap use kuch bhi bol dijiye par neil ke baare me mat btaiye

Prakash - par Shweta ji

Shweta - Prakash ji please

Bebe - Shweta sahi keh rahi hai Prakash... use stress mat de aur use bol de ki neil theek hai...( she said with difficulty )

Prakash - theek hai bebe

By the time Prakash picks up Avni's call, her phone is disconnected, so Prakash calls back Avni and Avni picks up Prakash's call in one ring... and Prakash speaks....

Prakash - Avni beta tumne is waqt call kyon Kiya ?

Avni - sorry papa aapko is waqt pareshan karne ke liye...

Prakash - koi baat nahi putter, par tu theek hai ?

Avni - haan papa main theek hu, par papa..... Saying this Avni hesitates a bit but then takes a deep breath and speaks...

Avni - papa kya aap ek baar Neil ko dekh sakte hai kya, ki wo theek hai yaa nahi ?

Prakash hears this from Avni and sees Neil who's lying unconscious in front of him and he speaks

Prakash - Avni putter....wo neil....haan putter Neil theek hai..

Shweta and Bebe see Prakash speaking this and Avni speaks from the other side..

Avni - papa aapne use kab dekha tha... please abhi uske room me jaakar use dekhiye n

Prakash hears this and sees Bebe and Shweta and then speaks

Prakash - accha theek hai, tum 2 mint ruko main abhi uske room me jaata hu...

Prakash lies and after pausing for a while, he speaks to Avni again..

Prakash - Avni beta, main Neil ke room me hi hu... wo theek hai

Avni listens to Prakash but somewhere she is still not getting rest and then Prakash speaks..

Prakash - Avni beta dekho abhi bahut raat ho chuki hai... tum soo jao
Main tumhe subah call karta hu....

Avni hears this from Prakash and speaks...

Avni - theek hai papa, good night

Prakash - good night bachcha.

Saying this Avni disconnects the phone but her mind is still restless and she says to herself

Avni - Avni, papa ne kaha hai n wo theek hai, fir mujhe itna ajib kyon lag raha hai....

She keeps thinking all this.




Time skip

Here, at Khanna House

Time passes and now it is morning, but Neil has not yet regained consciousness nor has his fever subsided...
Rather his fever has increased even more than before.

The doctor comes again in the morning, and after checking him he says that Neil has 106 degree fever, due to which anything can happen to him now...Even if his fever does not subside in 24 hours, So he won't be able to save his life either.

All gets shocked to hear this and at the same time gets worried and scared for him.... The doctor starts Neil's treatment in Neil room itself, he constantly gives him liquids through his veins...

On the other hand, Bebe goes to the her house temple and starts praying for Neil, while Shweta and Prakash sit beside Neil in a worried state....

Time skip

On the other hand, even after so many treatments, seeing no improvement in Neil's condition, the doctors speak...

Doctor - inki aisi haalat kaise ho gyi...? just by getting wet in the rain, no one gets so much fever... does he have any serious tension or problem ?

Shweta Prakash listens to this words of doctor and remembers how Neil has been yearning for Avni since last one week.. And in worry of Avni, he is neither eating nor sleeping, he is not aware of anything except Avni...

The doctor sees both of them silent and speaks

Doctor - Unless, you will not give me correct information about the patient.. I will not be able to treat him well...
He's not responding to any medicine given by me...
Inhe dekh kar lag raha hai jaise ye khud theek nahi hona chahte... Agar aisa hi chalta raha to aage main kya, koi doctor inhe theek nahi kar payega.... and now just pray to God that by tomorrow morning he come to his senses or else....

Shweta Prakash gets scared after hearing this and now they are not able to understand what to do.

After listening to the doctor, they have already come to know that now Neil does not need any medicine or doctor but he needs Avni.. But Avni does not want to come here..

They know that Avni loves him, she cares about him too, but they don't want to pressurize Avni because of this condition of Neil, they do not want to force her to come here.
Now what they do, they do not understand anything...

Prakash - Shweta ji ab sirf Avni hi humare Neil ko theek kar sakti hai....

Shweta hears this words of Prakash And she sees her son lying on the bed unconscious, her eyes filled with tears and she said...

Shweta - Prakash ji par avni yehan nahi aana chahti... aur hum us par pressure nahi daal sakte Neil ki is haalat ke baare me bta kar...

Prakash hears this words of Shweta and sees her.....


Time skip

Now again its Night, but there is no improvement in Neil's condition, A whole day has passed but Neil has neither regained consciousness nor is his fever coming down.. The doctors have also answered that now only pray to God that by tomorrow morning he should come to his senses.

Everyone in Khanna House is worried and scared not seeing any improvement in Neil's condition. Bebe is praying for him sitting in the temple of the house.

And here, Again time skip

Next morning

At Mehta house, around 8 Am

Avni is sitting quietly in the balcony of her room... she still hasn't get peace. She has been restless since last night, but her restlessness is not calming down.

While Neela Maa comes to Avni's room, she has a coffee cup in her hand...
She sees Avni in the balcony and comes to her and Avni feels her presence and sees her.

Neela - good morning bachcha

Avni - good morning maa

Neela - ye lo, coffee

Avni sees neela maa and says

Avni - maa abhi nahi, mera man nahi kar raha

Neela maa hears this and says...

Neela - bachcha ho kya gya hai tumhe, kal se tumne kuch nahi khaaya hai, aur abhi bhi mna kar rahi ho... aise to fir tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi....

Avni hears neela maa words but not said anything....

Neela Maa sits close to her and puts the cup of coffee by the side and speaks to her...

Neela - bachcha kya hua hai ? Tum kyon itni restless dikh rahi ho... ?

Avni sees neela maa and says

Avni - maa kuch accha nahi lag raha hai... aisa lag raha hai wo theek nahi hai... Maine papa ko call karke puchha bhi aur unhone kaha ki wo theek hai.. Par maa fir bhi mujhe kuch accha feel kyon nahi ho raha hai ?

Neela listens to this and before this Neela says something.....both hear the sound of doorbell ringing....

Neela - main dekh kar aati hu kaun hai ?

Avni nods

Neela comes downstairs in the hall and sees that Ashish has already opened the door and Neela is surprised to see the person standing there..











To be continued....................



































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