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Next morning
At Mehta House
Avni Neela and Ashish are sitting at the breakfast table and Ashish Neela is
doing everything possible to light up Avni's mood...
Both of them never thought that they would see their daughter in a way where their daughter would stop smiling....
While Neela is trying to feed Avni and Avni is repeatedly refusing.
Avni - maa please mujhe kuch nahi khaana.... ( She says this because she knows, even Neil will not be eating anything without her there)
Neela sees ashish and then she speaks to Avni...
Neela - bachcha kal maine tumhe kuch samjhaaya tha uske baad bhi tum aise behave kar rahi ho... bachcha agar tum kuch khaaogi nahi to tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jayegi...
Avni sees her
Neela - abhi tumhe apna bahut khayal rakhna hai... aur apne liye naa sahi hum sabke liye hi thoda saa khaa lo...
Avni hears this from neela and her eyes fill with tears... Neela's maa wipes her tears and Avni thinks somethings and eats a morsel from Neela's hand...
On the other side
At Khanna House
Here too everyone is sitting at the breakfast table, but today there is no expression on anyone's face...Everyone is sad and Bebe asks Shweta..
Bebe - Neil ne kuch khaaya ?
Shweta sees bebe and speaks
Shweta - bebe aap mujh se uske baare me kuch mat puchhiye... bheema uske room me breakfast lekar gyi hai aur iske aage mujhe kuch nahi pta
Bebe sigh hearing Shweta answers And after this she says something, only then she sees that Bheema is returning from Neil's room and has breakfast in her hand which is untouched...
Bebe - kya hua ? tumne Neil ko breakfast nahi diya ?
Bheema - bebe, Neil Bhaiya darwaja nahi khol rahe hai... Maine bahut baar khatkhataya par unhone darwaja nahi khola
Shweta hears this and clenches her fist to control her emotions, and Bebe tells Bheema to go from there...And then she thinks about something, then she's herself about to go to neil room taking his breakfast Just then she, Shweta and Prakash see that Neil is coming down the stairs in a hurry and Neil walks out of the house before Bebe stops him.
Bebe - ye itni hadbadi me kahan jaa raha hai ?
Shweta speaks before Prakash says anything on Bebe's question.
Shweta - jrur kuch galat hi karne jaa raha hoga... pta nahi ab ye kya karne wala hai
Bebe sees Shweta but does not say anything because somewhere Shweta's anger is justified at this time and she should also react like this.
Soon Neil reaches xyz Park and finds the man standing there who called him here...
Neil biting his lips, takes his steps slowly closer to the man... and coming closer to him, Neil speaks
Neil - aapne mujhe bulaya papa ?
Neil speaks with fear and Ashish turns to Neil and sees him....
Neil looks at Ashish and bends down to touch his feet but today when Neil touches Ashish's feet Ashish does not give him any blessings...
Neil realizes this and then stands in front of Ashish.
Ashish looks at him and speaks
Ashish - mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Neil - hmm.. boliye
Ashish - yehan baitho
Ashish speaks pointing him towards a bench... first Ashish sits on that bench and then Neil sits next to Ashish
Neil is looking down and Ashish looks at him and speaks.
Ashish - You know Neil, I can't bear a scratch on my daughter...But you gave her so much pain that my daughter was about to end her life
Neil closes his eyes hearing this...
Ashish - I feel that the person who has caused so much pain to my daughter, I should give more pain to him than her, but I can't do anything with you even if I want to....
Neil hears this and he knows he deserves this harsh words of ashish...
Ashish - Because my daughter loves the person who has caused so much pain to her...
Neil hears this and sees Ashish....
Last night when Avni is telling Neela she loves Neil very much, Ashish overhears her words and then he decides that he will talk to Neil And he called Neil here this morning..
Ashish- Neil I don't know how all this happened between you two and why this distance has come between you both because till now Avni has not told us the whole truth
Neil hears this and suddenly he remembers something and understands why Avni is not telling anything to anyone and before this he speaks something.... Ashish again speaks
Ashish - I had chosen you for Avni with a lot of hope... I was sure on you that you will love my daughter somewhere, more than me, but now.....After all this my faith has not only been shaken but also broken... I didn't expect this from you
Neil hears and speaks
Neil - papa I'm sorry....But papa please give me a chance... I will win your trust again. I had gone astray... my only fault is that I had misunderstood my right over Avni...Papa, I love her very much and in this love I was a little lost... I thought now she is only mine, because of which I started controlling her but I did not know and realized that I am giving her pain in my love
Ashish hears Neil words and sees him
Neil - papa just one chance... i know main aap sabke saath saath sabse bada gunehgaar main Avni ka hu..
Ashish sees him
Neil - But papa just give me a chance, I will win the trust of all of you, especially Avni... I will try everything so that I can become worthy of Avni again.
But for that you all have to give me a chance... without all of you I will not be able to do anything....
Ashish listens to this and speaks
Ashish - Now till my daughter does not forgive you.. don't expect any forgiveness from us too....
Neil looks at Ashish and speaks
Neil - papa mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai
Ashish sees him and Neil speaks
Neil - I have to tell you the whole truth because I know Avni won't tell you anything
Ashish looks at him with questioning eyes when he says so.
Neil - Avni had pro...promised me before attempting su..suic...suicide....that...she would never tell any...anything about me to any..anyone...And that's the reason why Avni hasn't told you anything till now... (He stutters, saying this thing)
Ashish gets shocked to hear this and Neil sees him and speaks...
Neil - But I want to tell you the whole truth and after that you can give me whatever punishment you want...
Saying this Neil tells to Ashish the whole thing which he told to his family yesterday And also he tells how Avni had promised him before committing suicide that she would never tell anything about him to anyone And now she is not telling anyone the truth of Neil, keeping the same promise
You all can read Chapter 81 to see Avni promise.
Ashish gets angry knowing the whole truth and he gets up from the bench and Neil also stands in front of him...Ashish looks at him with bloodshot eyes and Neil speaks
Neil - Papa please I accept the punishment you want to give me but please let me meet Avni just once
Ashish hears this and speaks
Ashish - kher mnano Neil, you are my daughter's husband whom she still loves after all this...
Otherwise, after what you have told me now, I don't even want to see your face...
You thought Parth and Avni....chii itni ghatiya soch...Get away from here, and don't come in front of me again....
Neil sees ashish and speaks
Neil - papa, maine avni par shaq nahi kiya... par parth, wo avni se....( Neil does not say anything more than this when Ashish shouts and asks him to leave in front of him)
Neil closes his eyes and following Ashish's orders, he goes away from him.
His last hope was also lost...Now from whom should he expect help?
He can't see any way out...
When Ashish called him in the morning to meet him, he thought that Ashish could help him, but now after knowing everything, Ashish doesn't even want to see his face.
He comes back home disappointed...
Bebe sees him coming in the house and goes after him but before she can stop Neil, Neil goes to his room and locks the door from inside.
bebe looks at him like this and knocks on the door and says
Bebe - Neil mujhe tujh se baat karni hai.. darwaja khol
Neil knows what bebe wants to talk to him... she wants to feed him food but Neil doesn't want to eat or drink anything at the moment....
Bebe comes back to the hall exhausted and gets worried about Neil's health...
3 days pass... Neil still does not leave his room and neither does he open the door...
Now along with the bebe, Shweta and Prakash also get worried for him...seeing his this behavior Because it's been almost 6 days now and Neil hasn't eaten a single grain of food.. and They haven't seen his face since 3 days
Everyone is trying to open the door of his room and only then Prakash speaks.
Prakash - neil apni zidd band karo, aur darwaja kholo Warna ab mujhe ye darwaja todna padega....
Even after Prakash says so, they does not get any response from the other side, then Prakash speaks.
Prakash - bebe, Shweta ji ab to darwaja todna hi padega....( Saying this, Prakash is about to hit the door, only then they hear the sound of the door opening..)
Everyone sees that Neil is standing in front of them by opening the door.
Everyone gets shocked seeing Neil...His face was completely discolored and he had dark spots under his eyes..Looking at him, it seems as don't know how long he has not slept
But everyone gets shocked when they see Neil ready to go somewhere...
And before this one of them speaks, Neil speaks
Neil - main Avni ko ghar wapas lene jaa raha hu...
Everyone hears this and is shocked.... and Neil is about to move on saying this when Shweta grabs his hand and speaks while stopping him...
Shweta - tu wahan nahi jayega
Neil smiles sadly and removes Shweta's hand over his hand, and says
Neil - mujhe aaj meri Avni se milne se koi nahi rok sakta... aap bhi nahi
Shweta gets shocked to hear this from Neil and she gets scared for Avni as she doesn't know Neil going there, how he will behave with Avni....
And before this someone else speaks or stops Neil from going there... Neil ignores everyone and goes out of the house....
On the other side
After meeting Neil, Ashish comes home that day and tells everything to Neela and Neela also gets angry on him knowing Neil's truth, And at the same time, Neela and Ashish tell Avni that they have come to know about everything, due to which Avni gets shocked.
She cannot believe that the Neil who had forbade her to tell everyone about him, he himself told everyone his truth.... But she does not say anything further and Neela and Ashish also decide that they will not stress Avni and there will be no talk on Neil's topic in this house now..
At the same time, amidst all this, one good thing happens with Avni is that two of her friends who were angry with her have come to her.....Ali and Riya come to know everything about Avni and both of them are very ashamed that they have called their friend so bad thing unnecessarily, And broke the friendship with her without knowing everything and thinking...
Ali and Riya come to Mehta House to meet Avni and say sorry to her for their behavior, Avni forgives them and once again the misunderstandings between the friends end.
At present
This morning, Avni suddenly asks Neela for Paneer Paratha for breakfast, which comes as a surprise to Neela Because Avni does not like paneer at all, but as Avni has demanded, Neela goes to the kitchen made for her.
Avni is sitting with Ashish in the hall and Ashish is telling Avni some jokes to lighten her mood, on which Avni could not laugh....But she was smiling slightly for Ashish.
Now since Avni has come here Ashish is doing his work from home... Neela Ashish doesn't leave Avni alone for a moment...Always trying to make her happy.
Suddenly the doorbell of their house rings and Avni and Ashish sitting in the hall hear this..
Ashish - main dekhta hu
Avni - aap ruko, main dekhti hu
Ashish - ok bachcha
Avni smiles slightly and gets up from the sofa and goes to open the door.
As Avni opens the door, she gets shocked when she sees Neil in front of her.....
And a smile comes on Neil's face as soon as he sees Avni's face in front of him.....Don't know after how many days he has seen the face of his love
Neil sees her and takes her name emotionally...
Neil - Avni....( saying this slight tears comes in his eyes And he wants to hug her but his steps stop seeing Avni going back )
all of a sudden, hearing her name from his mouth, Avni stumbles little and she starts taking her steps back when she see him moving towards her.....She looks at him and can't believe that Neil is standing in front of her...
She looks at him and feels pain seeing his face where there is no glow on his face and no other emotion...There is only sadness in his face and eyes...
And before this both look at each other more... Ashish comes from behind Avni and speaks
Ashish - kaun hai princess?
Ashish asks this and his eyes fall on Neil and he gets shocked to see Neil in this house....He sees Avni's face who is looking little scared after seeing Neil...
Neil is only looking at Avni but when Neil sees that Ashish comes and stands in front of Avni hiding her from his sight only then Neil looks at Ashish.... he sees ashish and comes close to him and bent down to touche Ashish's feet but today again Ashish does not bless him and Avni who's standing behind Ashish she grabs Ashish from behind....She suddenly gets little scared thinking something.... And here Ashish feels Avni's hold on his back and he speaks
Ashish - Tum yehan kyon aaye ho ?
Neil - I have come here to take my wifey back home...
Avni hears this and closes her eyes and there neela comes speaking...
Neela - kaun hai ashish...? ( Neela comes saying because she heard the doorbell in the kitchen...)
Neil sees Neela and Neela also gets shocked to see Neil in the house at this time... Neil comes close to Neela and touches her feet too...But Neela also does not give him any blessings and as soon as Neil stands up after touching Neela's feet, he gets shocked when he hears Parth comes in the hall taking Avni's name...
Parth - avu ye raha tera paneer Paratha....( Parth comes out of the kitchen saying this and has a plate of food in his hand.. he's making food for her with the help of neela )
But he says nothing further when he sees Neil in the house
While Neil is shocked to see Parth here and everyone else sees Neil how he is surprised to see Parth.
Parth has no one here except Ashish and Neela....That's why now that Parth has come here, Neela and Ashish instead of letting him stay alone in his house, tell him to stay here till he is in India.
They do not find anything wrong in Avni and Parth's friendship, so why should they hate Parth.
Parth is that friend of Avni, who does not leave her alone under any circumstances...Even though he is not with her in her happiness, but in the time of her sadness, he tries his best to make Avni happy as before.
Parth comes forward and sees Neil...
Neil and Parth look at each other and Avni is just trying to read Neil's face, lest he gets angry seeing Parth,
But today Avni proves to be wrong here seeing that Neil takes away his eyes from Parth without giving much importance to him and speaks to Ashish...
Neil - papa please, Avni ko mere saath jaane dijiye.... main maanta hu main galat hu par mujhe meri galti sudhaarne ka ek mauka to dijiye....
All hears this and Ashish speaks
Ashish - kya meri beti ne tumhe baar baar mauke nahi diye ?
Neil hears Ashish's words and remembers that Avni gave him countless chances but every time he let her down.
Neil sees Avni who is standing next to Ashish and Ashish is holding Avni's hand in his hand...
Neil - main jaanta hu Avni ne mujhe bahut Mauke diye hai.. par kya aap sab mujhe ek aakhiri mauka nahi de sakte ?
Main aap sab se waada karta hu main aage se aap log ko koi shikayat ka mauka nahi dunga..
Everyone listens to him but no one says anything.... Neil looks at Avni and speaks
Neil - Avni, main waada karta hu ab se tum jo bologi main wo sab karunga... please mere saath chalo... tumhare bina rehna muskil hai... main ab aise aur nahi reh paunga
Avni hears his words And remembers that Neil always promises like this but once he gets her forgiveness, he comes back to his old form....And now, so much things has changed now..she can't take the risk of going back with him...she gets scared thinking something...
Seeing Avni not saying anything, Neil again pleads with her, but before that Ashish speaks to him...
Ashish - Avni tumhare saath kahin nahi jayegi.... aur ab jao yehan se meri beti ko pareshan karna band karo...
Neil listens to Ashish and looks at Avni with pleading eyes...Avni sees him but then turns away from him....
Neil sees her turning away from himself like this and his heart breaks after seeing her like this....He is able to tolerate the anger of everyone else, but seeing Avni like this, his heart is breaking every moment... but he does not give up and speaks
Neil - theek hai main yehan se baahar chala jaata hu.. par avni tum mujhe jaanti ho... agar main yahan aaya hu to tumhe apne saath lekar hi jaunga... aur tumhe mere saath chalna hoga... mujhe ek mauka dena hoga....
Aur is baar ye meri zidd nahi hai.. main tumse request kar raha hu.....
main yehi baahar khada tumhara intezaar karunga... tumhe jitna waqt lena hai le lo
Avni hears this and gets shocked... she knows how stubborn Neil is...If he is saying something like that means he really won't leave until Avni goes back home with him....
At the same time, after saying all this, Neil leaves the Mehta house and here Avni runs to her room.
Ashish Neela and Parth see each other in the hall and get worried for her....
Neil comes out of the house and exits the gate of Mehta House and stands next to his car on one side of the road... From where Avni's room is visible.
Neil puts his eyes on Avni's room and starts waiting for her standing there.
To be continued........
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