Committed II

By SaucyMontana

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Book 2 of Committed More

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By SaucyMontana

Analise
March 9
3:32 pm

"Ridin with my twin and 'nem. And we all look good as fuck. She say she my Oop but I don't know her, had to look her up" I rapped cardi's part while dancing, following Dre into the house

We literally just arrived home from our trip and I was sooo ready to see my babies right now

Dre shook his head, not even looking back at me while he unlocked the door and I stood there dancing

"Ana get yo happy ass in the house" he eventually told me while he grabbed our bags and took them in the house

I happily danced my way into the house which he couldn't help but laugh at

"That nigga a munch and he gone eat me like a mango!"

"Ima let you have yo fun till them kids get here"

"I'm ready to see my babiessss. Why you ain lit"

"You got enough energy for the both of us"

"Cause I feel good" I jokingly tried to moonwalk and tripped over my own damn feet causing me to fall. The minute I hit the ground Dre started laughing but eventually helped me up

"Chill out witcho hyper ass"

"I hit the ground hard as hell just now"

"I know you did. I heard it. You good?" He asked while grabbing my hand and pulled me to him, wrapping his arms around me

"I'm good now" I smiled, hugging Dre's neck and kissed him as the door opened

"Y'all ain had enough of fuckin yet?" Keem asked, carrying Gio's car seat while he closed the door behind him

"My babyyyyy" I backed away from Dre and made my way over to my son. I grabbed the car seat from keem and put it on the ground grabbing gio out of it

The minute he saw my face my baby started smiling so big and kicked his legs

"Hey mommy's big boy! I missed you sooooo much"

"Y'all caught me at the right time when Ana called and said meet y'all over here cause we was bout to run these streets"

"You better not have had my baby in the streets" I told keem while I kissed Gio's cheek and laid his head on me. Meanwhile he grabbed at my necklace

"Me and gio had fun this week"

"What y'all did?"

"That's between us. We can't tell you about our fun" he told me before looking around "Gigi not here yet?"

"No. Autumn probably gonna take forever. And I called y'all as soon as we walked out of the airport"

"I heard you just now talking shit" autumn said as she walked into the house, holding Gigi who was asleep "and why y'all got that door unlocked"

"We just got here" I answered while she laid Gigi on the couch and I poked out my bottom lip "she look so tired"

"She is. All they did everyday after school was play, eat, play some more, barely slept and did it again the next day. And yesterday they played outside all day long until it started getting real late and they stayed up all night with momma watching Disney movies"

"I'm glad she had fun"

"She really did. Her and Brooklyn together is something funny to watch" she told me before changing the subject as Dre grabbed gio from me "noooo. Bitch! Did you hear about Aysia?"

"I could care less to hear anything about that girl. She can go to hell for all I care"

"Shit, she probably there" keem chuckled and I rose my eyebrow

"Girl Aysia dead"

"Oh shit. Forreal?"

"Yeah Forreal. Maggie killed her"

I widened my eyes, just a little shocked "oh shit"

I looked at Dre who just shrugged

"That's tough"

"They released Maggie's mugshot this morning on the news. She killed Aysia, some man they both were dealing with AND the club owner at the place maggie worked at"

Dre and keem looked at each other and keem laughed

"That's wild. I was there and left literally right before that shit happened too" keem told us "Maggie and Aysia started fighting in the club, Maggie said she was gone kill Aysia and shit went left from there"

"Well.. at least you don't have to worry about her popping back up" I told Dre and he held a straight face before laughing a little as well as keem and I kissed my teeth

"Y'all stop. I'm being forreal and y'all making me seem like an asshole"

"Shit. Ion too much care what happened to her. My daughter right here, safe, sleeping peacefully"

"When I saw that she got killed I was like that's wild. That whole little friend group aubrielle had.. look at all of em now"

"Well obviously I should've been the last one any of em should've been worried about cause it seem like they had issues within that group that should've been taken care of. But that is a very unfortunate situation.. and ima leave it at that"

"See I hope I can be as mature as you one day" keem told me "cause let somebody die that did me as dirty as she did you... I would've been dancing all over that bitch grave"

"Ana always been the most mature one growing up. I don't know why" Autumn explained "so.. on a positive note, how was the trip?"

"It was sooo much fun"

"And by fun you mean y'all went out and had fun or y'all spent most of the time having the type of fun that'll have you stressing poor Dre out for another 9 months"

"Both. But I'm won't be having another baby and besides, I did not stress Dre out while I was pregnant"

Dre sarcastically laughed and I frowned

"Oh, I stressed you out?"

"Now why y'all getting lil crazy started?" Keem chuckled

"Ion know why they playing with me keem..." I answered before realizing he called me crazy "wait. Did you just call me crazy?"

"I need to call you delayed cause that's how you acting" he responded before looking at Dre "oh yeah. I need to talk to you"

"I bet you and Darius was ready for us to get back so y'all can gossip with my man"

"Hell yeah. And he already know wassup"

"Well hand me my son"

"He good" Dre moved away a little before walking off and I sucked my teeth, going to our room

"That man don't ever let me keep my son for long"

"It's his first boy. You should've known this. Gio is one of the boys now and he's only getting older. It gets worse from here"

"They better not corrupt my baby... I need to check the mail too. Emoni was supposed to do it while she was over here but I don't think she even came"

"I'll walk with you to the mailbox" autumn told me as we headed outside

"Soo..." autumn started talking "when we starting wedding planning?"

I shrugged, swinging my arms as we walked

"What's the hold up?"

"Other than a new baby, me just starting back working, the Gigi custody situation and us discussing moving.. nothing"

"I thought y'all was been supposed to move"

"Yeah but then that pregnancy test humbled me and everything had to center around a new baby"

"Maybe you deserved to be humbled. All that bragging you used to do. I'm honestly surprised it took you this long to get pregnant"

"Chileeee me too. I almost got caught up that one time me and Dre had sex during that time we broke up"

"Y'all we're not broken up. Let's tell the truth"

I rolled my eyes "ANYWAYS. We accidentally had sex but I hopped my ass up that next morning and got that plan b real fast"

"How did y'all accidentally have sex?"

"I tripped and fell back on the bed. Somehow my clothes came off. He tried to help me up, same thing happened to him and boom. I should've sued that apartment building for making us slip and fall like that. We could've gotten hurt. Luckily I landed on the bed and he landed in me"

Autumn cracked a laugh while waving her hand

"I'm so done with you Ana"

"You'll never be done with me. I always been your favorite sister" I boasted while I grabbed the mail out of the mailbox and looked through it.

Bills.... A stupid credit card approval... and a letter in the mail from Georgia tech

When I looked at the envelope from Georgia tech I rose my eyebrow and saw it had Dre's name on it

"Am I reading that right?" I asked Autumn, showing it to her and she nodded

"Yeah. Dre going to school?"

"I don't know. He didn't tell me"

"Maybe he wanted to surprise you"

"You think so?" I asked with a smile

"Obviously the boy willing to do anything to make you happy. He probably wanna see how you'll react if he surprises you and tell you something like that"

I kept smiling, looking at the envelope and looked up

"Ima just sit it in the kitchen until he gets done talking to keem. This shit got me smiling hard Autumn"

"I can tell. I see both rows of your teeth"

I kissed my teeth, hitting her with the mail in my hand and she laughed




Dre

"...so after the started fighting Maggie went to her car, opened that back door while I walked off to Darius car while I was on the phone with one of my hoes. Darius snuck up behind her..." Keem explained before pulling an imagining trigger "got all three of em... but you know, from this point forward. Maggie did it so... she shot all three of em"

I laughed a little while rubbing gio back while he laid on the bed like he was going to sleep

"Is it bad ion feel bad?"

"I mean. To be honest the way it could look from somebody that don't know shit, it would look bad because all they know is you and her had a baby together so they gone assume y'all had a real relationship and all that extra shit. But for those of us that know the real shit. ME PERSONALLY, I would've been dealt with that girl a long time ago. How many times you got arrested over Aysia being childish? How many times she put yo business out to the world AND tried to get you killed! Nah. And then she asked June outta all people. Lame ass June"

"Yeah lame ass June"

"The lil do-boy that everybody used to slap around and make him run our errands. And now he think he her hit man or some shit. We on his ass next and then we chillin out for good"

"I thought y'all would've been got him"

"We almost did. But some uninvited guest popped up"

"So"

"Nigga it was Kira. And she had Darius son with her"

I stopped rubbing gio back "what!?"

"Nigga yeah! He been Fuckin on both of y'all babymommas. And Darius pissed as hell. More so about her having his son in that Nigga house and in his face"

"I bet so. Darius don't play about his kids... he said something to her?"

"Nah. But trust me. You know yo brother so he going crazy tryina bite his tongue. But I told him if he want june gone, he can't say nothing cause if he confront kira any kinda way and something happen to June, it'll point back at Darius"

I sighed, shaking my head "true. But he need to say something"

"If that's the case we gone have to hold off on June"

"If that's what you gotta do then do that. Cause I know my brother and him holding shit in ain gone be good for nobody. Especially when it come to them kids"

"Ight then. You sure? Cause we just making sure we lookin out for you dre"

"Yeah. I ain pressed bout June. And with no Aysia what he gone do? He can wait a lil longer. Just let Darius curse Kira ass out and get his son. Y'all looking out for me and ima look out for y'all. So I'm TELLIN you. Darius crazy ass don't need to hold shit in"

"Bet. Ima hit him up and let him know. Cause I ain heard from him all day. I hit up trin and asked her about him before I came over here and she said she was wondering what was going on cause he was too calm for her"

"She don't know nothing, do she?"

"Nah. Only emoni know about Aysia but only me, you and Darius know about Kira and June"

"Yeah don't tell emoni bout that. Her lil ass don't need to be going back to jail"

"Oh shit. Lil cuz went to jail!"

"Cause she crazy as shit like her damn momma and her brother"

"Chill on my people. You ain got it all up there either"

"I'm the one with the most common sense outta everybody. You included"

"Nigga fuck you. That's why I been feeding yo son good so I know he gotta nice lil shitty diaper coming soon"

"And you changing that shit too"

"Nah. Big keem off babysitting duty. I'm bout to go fuck on my lil freak"

"Don't be out here getting bitches pregnant"

"I'm not you and Darius. I use protection faithfully"

"Nigga fuck you"

Keem laughed while I picked gio up

"Go ahead and get back in daddy mode. I'll hit you up later after I go talk to this crazy ass muthafucker"

"Chill on my brother" I chuckled while keem left the room and I looked down at gio "wassup twin"

Gio looked at me with his mouth open before smiling and talking

"Keem leaving?" Ana asked, walking into the room and stood near the door

"Yeah. Autumn gone?"

"Yeah" she told me with a smile

"The hell you smiling for?"

"I can't smile?"

"Not like that. You look like you plotting"

"I'm not. But.." she held up an envelope "you got something in the mail from Georgia tech"

"What if say?"

When I asked her that she wasted no time opening the envelope and started smiling big as hell when she read the letter

"I mean, obviously you were accepted into the school. When did you apply? I didn't know you were thinking about going to school"

"I talked to yo momma about it the other week when we went to the house without you and she helped me apply. I ain wanted to tell you until I got that" I nodded in the direction of the letter while she walked over to the bed and sat down beside me

"I am SOOOOOOOO proud of you Dre. This is big. Real big. The smile on my face can't even describe how happy I am for you right now. What made you wanna go to school?"

"You. My kids. And I just wanted to try it"

"Well you already know I'm right here every single step of the way. I'm so happy for you dre! I could scream"

I smiled at Ana "thank you for being happy for me"

"Of course. You so supportive of everything I do and you always there for me so why wouldn't I do the same? If not more"

She hopped up and ticked Gio's chin causing him to smile before she started dancing backwards

"I knew I was in a good mood for a reason. Issa good day. Now I'm really bout to work my ass off so I can get you this lambo for your graduation gift" she told me before dancing her way out the room and I shook my head while looking at gio

"Yo momma crazy as hell twin"

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