Committed II

By SaucyMontana

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Book 2 of Committed More

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By SaucyMontana

Analise
February 14
1:04 pm

"I'm so glad you let me try this on you. It looks sooo good"Kenya said to me as she styled my hair. I looked at it through the mirror smiling

"I'm in love with this"

"I knew you would be. That's why I wanted to try it on you before I put it on my booking site. Just don't come back to me in a couple of months showing me another ultrasound"

We both laughed

"You won't have to worry about seeing another ultrasound from me again, trust me. But just know I'm lit tonight"

"I bet you are. Y'all just better make sure them babies good and sleep. I'm pretty sure they don't wanna be traumatized in the middle of the night"

"Trust me ima make sure. And it ain shit to put gio in the room with his real momma cause she swear that's her baby"

"You better leave Gianna alone. You know that's her baby. You was just the surrogate"

"Well i pray she sleep good today at school so she can be ready to wake up all hours of the night then cause the surrogate gone be busy. If you know what I mean"

"I know EXACTLY what you mean" Kenya laughed as the door to the shop opened

Some girl walked in looking around

"You gotta appointment?" Kenya asked her and she nodded. I looked through the mirror seeing the girl staring at the both of us

"With somebody named Naomi. I'm like 20 minutes early"

"Oh well I guess you can sit and wait till she get here"

The girl went and sat down over in the waiting area still looking at us but I ignored it, pulling out my phone and went to my ig story, recording Kenya doing my hair through the mirror

"I just got my girl right yall" Kenya smiled, combing through the curls and the fluffed my hair a little "Dre getting her pregnant TONIGHT"

I gasped, laughing "why would you say thatttt"

I ended the video and we both were still laughing. She finished up my hair and once she was completely done I let her take some pictures and videos

"Of course I said this was free because I was only practicing tape-ins on you but you of course somebody don't listen" Kenya informed me and I laughed

"Dre sent you money"

"He don't listen"

"Deandre never listens. Him or his kids. Ion know what ima do with any of them"

"Well you can start with giving Gigi back to her real momma"the girl that was waiting said

Me and Kenya both looked at her

"Excuse me?"

"I'm just saying. You sitting here complaining about a child you took from their momma. You are Aysia's baby daddy's other babymomma right?"

"And let me guess you one of Aysia stans?" Kenya said as she crossed her arms

"Ion know what the hell you think you supposed to be doing like Aysia guard dog or something. And she better be paying you good as hell to be playing with yo life like this cause you DONT know me. You don't know shit other than whatever she telling y'all so make sure you know some shit before you try to tell me what to do about MY child again. And I wasn't complaining, dumb bitch" I simply told her while checking Dre's location and saw that he was on time to pick me up

Kenya looked the girl up and down

"You lucky this ain't my shop" she told the girl as the door opened again and the hair stylist who I'm guessing was Naomi, walked in

"Thank you Kenya for my hair. I'll talk to you later girl"I thanked her and she nodded

"Okay"

I grabbed my stuff and left out of the salon, seeing Dre's car parked out front. I smiled, walking up to the car and smiled even bigger when I saw Dre holding some flowers

He flashed me a smile as I got in the car, passing the flowers over to me

"You lookin fine as hell"

"Thank you...these are for meeee" I dramatically said, leaning over to kiss him then looked at the flowers "you soooo sweet"

I looked in the backseat and saw gio was asleep so I turned back around

"I need him UP so he can sleep good tonight"

Dre grinned while driving off "oh you finally bout to let me take this virginity you swear you got?"

"Yeah. I think so. Cause you know ion get naked for just anybody"

"Well I seen you naked a couple- more than a couple times"

"Well you deserve it" I said as I kept my eyes on the flowers

They were different shades of pink and white with many different types of flowers. I'm pretty sure these were not cheap at all

"Today makes 3 years since we first met and I must say. It's been a very VERY long 3 years"

Dre looked over at me "these been the best 3 years of yo life. Don't play"

"Hmmm.. let's see. I spent majority of the first year going back and forth with ya babymomma. This past year I spent majority of it pregnant... Ill say the only decent year was the second year because I was neither pregnant or arguing"

He sucked his teeth before we both started laughing

"Let me stop before I make you cry cause you lowkey emotional. These have been 3 of the best years"

"I'm not emotional"

"Deandre who you lying to right now?"

"Ain nobody lying"

"You are. You are soooo emotional. Especially when you get in your feelings. You know how many times I called trin cursing you out"

"I knew you and trin be talkin bout me on the phone. Y'all obviously ain got shit else to discuss"

"Cause you and Darius took our lives away from us"

"I took you outta the streets. You should be thankful"

"No YOU should be thankful. Cause WE took y'all outta the streets. The brothers of destruction going around fucking everything and everybody. Planting seeds"

"That's Darius"

"I'm pretty sure your track record is just as long as his. Only difference is you didn't leave everybody you fucked with a permanent souvenir"

"You gone chill off my brother" Dre chuckled

"Ima chill. I'll let him be great cause I'm the past two  years he only had one baby. Seems like a record and I'm proud"

"You ain shit" Dre shook his head, continuing to drive and laugh at me





Trin

This year for Valentine's Day I told Darius that all I wanted was a peaceful day. Of course he brought me shit, but surprisingly he actually made sure I got the peace I wanted. The house was clean, it was empty and Darius got me some food and snacks delivered to the house while he went and picked up Callie, spending time with both her and melody wherever he took them

I laid on the couch under a blanket rewatching one mo' chance season one while stuffing my face

" my bitch yodela know she fine" I smiled at the screen, hearing a knock on the door

No lie, I ignored it at first but whoever it was banged on the door the next time so I groaned, getting up

"I'm supposed to be left alone today" I muttered, going to answer the door seeing it was Kira

"What you doing here?" I asked, looking her up and down

"Where is my baby daddy?"

"Not here"

"That's not telling me where he is"

"What do you want Kira?"

"I'll discuss that with my baby daddy"

"Cool. Bye"

I was about to close the door but she stopped it

"Last time I checked this ain't your house to be closing doors on people"

"This is very much my house. Now if you not gonna tell me what you need then you can go. Darius gotta phone. You can call him if it's that deep"

"I have no problem calling MY baby daddy"

"You keep putting so much emphasizing on the fact that he's YOUR babydaddy. You far from being the only babymomma so I wouldn't even try that did but okay... I got better shit to do"

"All you do is live rent free off of Darius. We already know that's the only reason why you with him. Without him you ain got shit but a baby"

"Damn.. is that forreal" I laughed sarcastically "and what do you have Kira so I can do better in life like you. Cause from what I've seen so far, you really do got me beat"

"And you tryina be funny. Cause girl trust me without Darius you ain shit but Dre lil girlfriends do-girl"

"And without Darius you still somebody else's problematic babymomma"

"And you supposed to be hurting my feelings? Cause unlike you at least I have my kids majority of the time"

"Girl I have my child majority of the time too. Whatchu tryina say?"

"Only cause you and Darius live together. Darius always got melody while you chasing Dre's girlfriend around like a pet. You don't have money, you don't do shit and you really think you can call yourself a mother. So yes! I might have 3 kids with 3 different daddies and might seem problematic, but you barely a mother! And you was dumb enough to go get pregnant again to keep a nigga when you was given a favor by losing the first one"

As soon as Kira said that I immediately punched her in her face. Call me all the names she want, say whatever she want about me, I don't care! I've heard it all! But the minute she wanna hit THAT deep below the belt, ima hit that bitch even harder in her face

I couldn't see nothing but red as I punched Kira repeatedly and I can't lie, she was fighting back, but that bitch wasn't getting up off the ground

"Trin!" I could hear somebody yell after a while and next thing I know I was pulled off of Kira

"Chill out lil crazy" I could hear Dre say and Ana grabbed my back while Kira tried to get up off the ground

"We was driving past and seen this. What the hell happened!?" Ana asked me but I wasn't paying her no attention

"Ion care how much shit you wanna talk about me but don't play with my fuckin kids BITCH!" I yelled at Kira and Ana cut her head at Kira

"Don't you start" Dre told Ana before pointing over at the car "go get my son out the car... Kira, leave"

"On my daughter! I'm on yo ass everytime I see you hoe" I threatened her while she hurried off to her car

Dre pulled me back into the house and made me sit down

"Ima need you to chill"

"That hoe told me I was given a favor losing my first baby and you think ima chill?!! FUCK THAT AND FUCK THAT BITCH. Ima beat her ass again! And again! And again until I get tired!"

"Why was she over here?"

"I don't know! But I'm tired of being nice to these females because of Darius. But she tried it and I reached my breaking point Dre. I'm DONE and I'm not like this" I ranted with tears in my eyes

He sighed before looking back at Ana, who walked into the house with gio

"We bout to sit over here with her till Darius get back. And if he ain back in time you gone stay here while I get Gigi from school"

"Okay" Ana responded before handing gio to and sat beside me

"You ain got no sane family members twin" Dre said to gio while walking off and and looked at me

"You did yo shit best friend. I'm shook"

" I know I did"

She laughed and I laid my head on her shoulder




Ana

9:10 pm

After finally coming home and getting a sugar hyped Gigi and gio down, me and Dre chilled in the room. I laid on the bed on my stomach facing the tv while Dre laid back against the headboard with his hand resting on my ass

"Ion know what the hell my daughter got going on at school but I'm bout to take her out" Dre mumbled with an attitude and I laughed

"Don't hate cause she came home with a bunch of Valentine's Day gifts. She's just that girl"

"That girl bout to get somebody kids beat on"

"Leave them kids alone.. I wish I had the sauce like that at 4 years old. I was lame"

"I believe it"

I looked back at dre and he chuckled

"Fuck you. But you love my lame ass"

"I do. All of it"he slapped my ass hard as hell

"You know..." I sat up, looking at Dre "this was my first time ever seeing trin fight"

"Forreal?"

"Yeah. As mean as trin is, she ain no fighter so that's how you know kira had her fucked up forreal"

"Ion blame her"

"You lucky you stopped me cause I was gone put my hands on her bout what she said"

"You don't need to be fighting nobody" he told me as he pulled me on his lap

"Today was soo chaotic I didn't even get to give you your gift" I hopped off of him and went to the closet, grabbing the bag then ran back to the bed, climbing back on top of him while handing it to him smiling

"I don't mean to toot my own horn but... I feel like my gift is top tier this year"

Dre opened the bag and pulled the box out, opened it and smiled. It was a pendant with a picture of the kids on it and it was most definitely real so it costed me a pretty penny. He then pulled out the second part of the gift which was a tshirt and started laughing when he saw what was on it

"You a different breed of special. I swear"

"It's cute ain it?"

"Yeah it is"

On the shirt was the picture of us that trin found on my Instagram from years ago. I got it blown up and put it on a shirt

"I should've framed it"

"Yeah you should've. Thank you mama"

I cheesed before he kissed me

Dre continued to look at both the shirt and the pendant before politely moving me off of him and got up, going to the dresser and pulled out an envelope

"You did yo shit with yo gifts but... you know I always gotta outdo you"

"You can't ever let me be great can you?"

She shook his head passing me the envelope "Nah"

I grabbed it from him and pulled out what was inside

It was a printed receipt and when I looked at it, my eyes widened before I glanced back up at Dre

"You got us tickets to go to Puerto Rico"

"The first week of March"

"I swear you making it so hard to not give you another baby right now" I groaned, wrapping my arm around him and kissed on him. Not even seconds later, gio started crying and I made a face

"You still need a reason to not give me another one?" He jokingly asked and we both laughed

"Yeahhh I think we good with just our two"

"Yeah we just gone keep it like that"

I nodded, kissing him again before getting up to go get gio

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