Reviewed by - S_A_Grace
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REVIEW
With the interesting title, the cover seems to match it along with your blurb but this does not attract readers. Your blurb should be long, add a couple of words to rich it up tell the readers what to not expect and in the story, you do what you do best.
The cover matches the settings showing a forest, fog and all but this is all good, try using a daring font that makes readers never forget. No grammar errors were found in your well-planned chapters and short blurb. The joy in the first chapter was funny and introduces us the readers to your main characters, but never rush into the history so quickly it loses the spark of the readers. Like why Shadow Wing has a bounty on his head, leave that as a mystery for the readers to find out, later.
Keep on writing <3