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prologue
character sketch
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
Avni's birthday
Avneil's engagement
wedding rituals
Avneil's wedding
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
New Character
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
A little clarity on Avneil's character
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
Avneil's 1st holi
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
Avneil's honeymoon - 1
Avneil's honeymoon - ll
Avneil's anniversary - 1
Avneil's anniversary - ll
Avneil's anniversary - lll
chapter 64
chapter 65
chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
chapter 95
chapter 96
chaptet 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
Reviews
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
chapter 116
chapter 117
chapter 118
chapter 119
chapter 120
chapter 121
chapter 122
chapter 123
chapter 124
chapter 125
chapter 126
chapter 127
chapter 128
chapter 129
chapter 130

chapter 53

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A small request 🤌 before starting the chapter... those who want the next part soon, please do some votes and comments to motivate me to write the next chapter soon...please 🙏

Previous chapter continue.....







Neil brings Avni to the beach to correct her mood, and exactly as Neil thought, Avni's mood also gets right there.
Both of them enjoy their evening together there by taking a walk, enjoying street food and doing some other things.

As it was evening time, there was a lot of crowd on the beach, there were people of all ages, small children, elders and old people.

Both avneil were engrossed in themselves, Avni brings Neil to the sea forcibly and then starts playing with water there.
Both are throwing water at each other and Neil was happy to see Avni's smile and happiness.

Suddenly, while throwing water on Neil in the sea, Avni's eyes fall on a small family standing behind Neil, in which there is a husband and wife And they both have a one and a half year old child in their arms, supposedly

Avni sees how both of them are playing by tossing & twirling her in the air and their child is smiling and laughing.

Neil sees that Avni is watching carefully at one place, he looks behind him and his eyes also fall on that beautiful family...

Then Neil turns to Avni and sees her smiling... he thinks of something and comes behind her and hugs her from back and speaks

Neil - kya dekh rahi ho wifey...

Avni - Neil look at that baby, how cute is that baby,

Neil smiles after hearing this and says thinking something

Neil - you want to have one too ?

Avni - yaa i think so ( she said dreamily)

Neil listens to this and smiles, and while keeping her hair aside, he kisses her ear slightly and whisper

Neil - Me too

In the flow Avni does not pay attention to what she said, but when she feels the touch of Neil's lips on her ear, Then she realizes that what both of them talked about inadvertently.

Avni turns in Neil's arms and sees him who is looking at her with a smile... she slightly blush and looks down...

Neil puts a finger under her chin, and makes her looks towards him and speaks

Neil - In future our baby will be more cute than that baby....

Avni smiles on hearing this and hugs him tightly hiding her face in his chest, Neil smile and wrapped his hand around her and kisses her hair.






Later

Both come out of the water, and after spending some more time together, both see that it is 8 o'clock, both decide to go back home.

Both of them come near the car but then Avni sees a candyfloss and she tells Neil

Avni - Neil I want candyfloss..

Neil looks at her and speaks

Neil - ok tum yehan ruko main lekar aata hu

Avni - ok

Neil goes from there to buy candyfloss which was a short distance from his car.....

Here as soon as Neil goes from here....There comes a man who is asking something to the people standing here and there...
His eyes fall on Avni and he comes closer to Avni.

Unknown - excuse me Miss

Avni - yes

Unknown - If you don't mind can you tell me where is this address...(he asks showing her an address on his phone)

Avni sees that address and she tells him the right direction

Unknown - thank you so much miss

Avni - ur welcome ( she said smiling )

That person also gives a smile to Avni and then he leaves from there...

But here by chance Neil sees this scene how Avni and the person were standing close talking and smiling...

Suddenly, anger fills inside him, and he comes close to Avni, avni sees him smiling and before this Avni can take her candyfloss from his hand, Neil speaks....

Neil - who was he? (he asks in a serious voice)

Avni - who?

Neil - whom were you talking to now?

Avni - I don't know him....(And before this Avni tells what she was talking to that person, Neil grabs her arm and speaks)

Neil - How many times have I told you that don't talk to unknown people.. I don't like you talking to anyone like this..

Avni looks at him and then his hand which is on her arm... then she looks at him and gives her explanation

Avni - I was not talking to him...he forgot his way so i just helped him...
What is my mistake in this? ( She speaks this and again looks at Neil's hand which is on her arm)

Neil notices her gaze and realizes that he is holding her arm tightly.

He quickly removes his hand from her arms and says

Neil - I'm sorry

Avni hears his sorry but doesn't say anything and goes to the other side of the car and sits on her seat.

Neil closes his eyes in regret and then he too sits inside the car and then speaks to Avni...

Neil - I'm sorry wifey, first I should have understood the whole thing

Avni - It's OK (she speaks while looking straight

Neil looks at her and then he sees candyfloss in his hand and speaks

Neil - Wifey here are your candyfloss... ( he speaks while giving it to her )

Avni - Thank you but I don't want it now... (she still says looking in front)

Neil looks at her and says something thinking

Neil - wifey Don't behave like a child now.. I said n sorry to you

Avni still not said anything

Neil - Wifey, we were talking about our child a while back, but I already have a stubborn child like you... jo baat baat par gubbaare jaisa muh phulaa leti hai....
I can't handle two kids together right now....(Neil says all this to lift her mood)

Avni hears this and looks at him angrily but doesn't say anything.

Neil holds both his ears and speaks

Neil - Forgive me for treating you like this....( While saying this he touches the place of her hand where he grabbed her tightly)

Avni sees him silently and then Neil leans close to her and kisses her arms where he holds her and then looks at her...who's still looking at him silently

He gives her a smile And then feeds her candyfloss with his hand which Avni eats silently and then slightly smiles on his loving gesture.... And somewhere infront of his love, she ignores his slightly different attitude that he had done to her a while back.











After coming back home

Avneil spends some time with family and then after dinner, both are in their room...

Avni changes her clothes in a baby pink night gown while Neil is dressed in a white T-shirt and black trousers.

Avni is fixing her wardrobe and she was putting the clothes she brought today in the right place...

While Neil sees her who is again looking a little silent since the time of the incident on the beach.

Neil ( in mind) - kya yaar Neil, Why can't you able to tolerate someone's closeness to her, and then make her unhappy with your behavior
What should I do now, till evening she was in such a good mood, now she again goes in her silent mode...

Neel thinks something and goes closer to her and right then Avni turns and bumps into him and then sees him and ask

Avni - do you want something?

Neil - yes

Avni - what

Neil - my wifey smile is missing, will you help me find her smile...( he said slightly making puppy face )

Avni listens to this and shook her head and says, separating from him...

Avni - Now I am fine Neil...( She says this while coming towards the bed and then after fixing some clothes lying on the bed, she is going to keep them in the wardrobe Then again Neil stands in her way and Avni looks at him)

Neil - Well I have to give you something...( he said and thinks to change the topic )

Avni - what

Neil smiles and then goes to the back of the bed where he hides some bags, after coming back home.

Neil takes out the bags from there and gives it to Avni.

Neil - These are some of the dresses that I bought for you today from the mall....

Avni sees him

Neil - And before you start your question... all I want to say is
What mom said in the mall is true.. I can never forget about you...
There I was just teasing you but now you look at these dresses and tell me whether you liked it all or not?

Avni sees him, and Neil tells her to open those bags with a gesture of his eyes.

Avni takes out clothes from those bags which have different types of dresses... Neil knows Avni doesn't know how to wear saree that's why he doesn't buy saree for her... And at the same time, he also knows that Avni has already taken the saree's with Shweta for the puja of Karva Chauth, so he takes dresses for her.

Avni finds all dresses very beautiful and she says

Avni - Thank you Neil, all these dresses are very beautiful

Neil smiles, and out of those dresses, he takes a red bodycon dress in his hand and then he hugs her from behind... and speaks while showing her that dress

Neil - I want you to wear this dress day after tomorrow

Avni - But Neil how can I wear this dress the day after tomorrow... Maa got me a very beautiful saree for puja

Neil smiles hearing this and kisses her neck by brushing her hair aside... she closes her eyes....and then Neil speaks

Neil - You wore this dress after puja, when we will be alone in our room... (saying this he turns her towards himself )

Avni sees him

Neil - Will you wear this dress for me?

Avni sees her and nods her head in yes, seeing that Neil smiles.

Later, along with a few other things Neil also manages to bring back Avni's smile and then the two fall asleep.












Time skip

Next day

Next day on Shweta's orders, Avni doesn't go to office with Neil, due to which Neil also skips office...

In the evening, Mehndi designer comes to Khanna House to apply mehndi to Avni, Shweta and Neela... On Shweta's request, Neela comes to Khanna house get her mehndi done.

On the other hand, Shweta has been decorating the whole house since today because it is Avni's first Karva Chauth.

Neil is sitting beside Avni while getting the mehndi done and there Shweta speaks to the mehandi designer.

Shweta - dekho miss designer sahiba..( she said this to her in little joking tone)
Meri bachi ki mehndi sbse acchi lagni chahiye kyonki ye uska pehla karwa chauth hai

Neela, bebe, and Avneil smiles hearing Shweta words....

Mehndi designer - ok mam...( She speaks while making a design on Avni's hand)

And With some sweet talks like this, everyone is enjoying their time together.. Neil helps Avni to drink water and sometimes to feed....

Soon all three of them get their mehndi done and all are sitting in the hall.

Ashish and Prakash come back from office...Ashish comes here because he knows that Neela is here and on this pretext he will meet his princess Avni.

As Prakash Ashish comes home and after being refreshed, Prakash sits in the hall with everyone, then he speaks.

Prakash - Neil

Neil - ji dad

Prakash - mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai....

Neil - boliye n

Prakash sees everyone and then he says

Prakash - kal ek urgent meeting aa gyi hai jo sirf tum attend kar sakte ho

Neil hears this and speaks

Neil - toh dad is me kya problem hai, main kal thodi der ke liye office chala jaunga

Prakash - nahi, meeting yehan nahi.. Delhi me hai

Neil - what ?

Prakash - haan

Shweta keeps listening to both of them and then speaks

Shweta - ye kaisi baat kar rahe hai Prakash ji.. kal Neil Mumbai se baahar kaise jaa sakta hai... Avni ka vrat use todna hai...

Prakash - main jaanta hu Shweta ji, aur maine bahut koshish ki meeting postpone karne ki par jinke saath meeting hai wo log nahi maan rahe aur ye meeting bahut important hai

Neil hears this from Prakash and sees Avni who is saddened by this news.

Prakash - Neil, the meeting is tomorrow afternoon... you leave tonight and come back by tomorrow evening..you will be back by the time of puja

Neil thinks something after listening to Prakash and after taking a deep breath he speaks

Neil - ok dad main chala jaunga but kal subah ki flight se...

Prakash smile and nods















After dinner at night

NeIl is packing his clothes to leave tomorrow morning and Avni watches him restlessly...And when she can't stand it anymore, she goes closer to him and hugs him from behind

Neil feels it and smiles and speaks

Neil - I'm only getting away from you for a few hours

Avni - I don't know anything but I feel very strange, is it important for you to go ?

Neil hears this and holds her hand, makes her in front of him and speaks

Neil - dad ne kaha hai to jana padega...
But you take good care of yourself tomorrow.. Nothing should happen to my wifey...( he said cupping her face )

Avni listens to this and suddenly tears well up in her eyes which makes Neil worried

Neil - what happened, why are you crying... ( he said wiping her tears )

Avni doesn't say anything to him..... Neil looks at her and he doesn't understand what happened to all of sudden by hearing this news and why she is taking so much stress unnecessarily And thinking about something, suddenly he lifts Avni in his arms.

Avni sees him and Neil speaks

Neil - It's too late, let's go to sleep now. ( Saying this he lays her on the bed and then himself lays beside her )

Neil is lying on one of his elbows and is watching her while caressing her hair and Avni is looking at him silently...

Neil sees that she is still not sleeping, so he leans towards her and kisses her forehead, and then kisses her whole face taking his own time And finally, placing his lips on hers, he covers both of them with duvets.










Next morning as per the ritual Avni wakes up at 4 am but as soon as she wakes up she does not find Neil by her side which makes her sad.
She thinks that Neil has gone but then she hears a knock at the door....

Avni gets up and opens the door and finds Shweta there...

Shweta - good morning Avni beta

Avni - good morning maa...( saying this she thinks something and she asked)

Avni - maa, Neil?

Shweta smiles and speaks

Shweta - wo niche hai.. tum bhi jaldi se niche aa jao tumhare liye suprisse hai...

Avni is happy to know that Neil is not gone yet, and then she quickly gets ready to go downstairs where she is find her loving husband with his lovely smile.

Neil comes close to her and then wishes her good morning and Kisses her forehead

And then Avni learns through Shweta that Neil has prepared all the food for today's sargi with his own hands, she is touched by this act of him....How much work he has to do today, still he did all this for her....
Also he feed her all the food with his hand....

And then with all the rituals, Shweta gives the sargi thal to Avni and Avni completes all the rituals before starting the fast.

(I don't know what happens, that's why I wrote in short, for which I'm sorry)

And after all this, Avni says bye to Neil with a heavy heart and Neil leaves home for Delhi.

















To be continued.............

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