🥂 TOASTS | General Fiction

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ACHIEVERS

Gift - GOLD

Shattered - MiniMoxx

First Impressions: 15/15

Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 10/10 

Character diversification and development: 10/10 

Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10

Overall Impression: 5/5

Total - 50/50

The Book cover and the title very much suited the plot. A girl thought what she had was perfect and suddenly what she thought was false. It is not new but the way you wrote it and the case, how she is entangled in it made the story and the plot refreshing. By the score you could tell I was impressed by your book. Your writing is great. The way you wrote Hollie's post and the transition to reality was amazing.

Gift - SILVER

Silver Bullet - SmugglingABook

First Impressions:-

Title: 5/5

Cover: 5/5

Blurb: 5/5

Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 10/10

Character Diversification And Development: 9.5/10

Grammar And Vocabulary: 10/10

Overall Impression: 5/5

Total: 49.5/50

So let me start by saying that I absolutely LOVED your book. Odessa’s cluelessness is so relatable and Bastan’s personality is really alluring. I love the small little introductions at the starting of each chapter and also like the fact that you have regularly rotated between Odessa, Bastan and Stella’s POV. If I HAD to ask you to change something, it would maybe be that you should describe your characters more vividly so that the readers can find the experience of reading your book even more enjoyable. Lastly, at the end of each chapter, try asking questions to your readers to make it more interactive and interesting.
Awesome job done!

Gift - BRONZE

Saving Grace - -stxllar-

First Impressions: 15/15

Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 9/10 

Character diversification and development: 10/10 

Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10

Overall Impression: 5/5

Total - 48/50

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