Shadow's Die So I Can Feel Alive

Part 4

Blade's POV

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Who the hell is here at 11 pm!! Im Trying to sleep before the concert!! I rumafe through my messy bedroom and practically drag myself to the front door. When I opened it I was astonished at what I saw......
Storm with a busted lip,black eyes, and..wait..Suitcases???!!

"C-can I-I c-omme in?" She asked shivering and stuttering. I nodded and moved over as she stepped in.
"Why are you here at midnight S?" I asked my voice barley above a whisper. She explained to me about her father an her money an even her mom being sober. I-wow she actually quit drinking for a few. Storm was violently shaking still though.
"What else happened S?"
"M-m-y d-ad raped me a-gain"
My heart stopped. No this isn't the first time this has happened but it still makes my heart quit working.
I couldn't say any thing so I just nodded and pointed to her bag
"My mom helped me leave. She told me to go to you."
Again I just nodded. I pointed to my room since I have no spare.
"Let's get some rest before the concert"
She gave me a small nod and a half smile
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So there's the next chapter!
Please tell me how it is.
Song of chapter- amaranth by nightwish