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COVER: 4/10
Cover is first impression of the book and I think you do better it this. I recommend to use a better image and creativity with mixtures of features of an Alien, some machine and Human. In short, something which dictate your storyline with mere book cover.
TITLE: 5/10
Your title doesn't justify the story. It also creates a faulty impression on the content or doesn't connect with the story. Try to pick an attractive title for your amazing story.
BLURB: 6/10
Improvisation on blurb can easily be done. You can stick to the actual dialogue from the book. Also, the more intimidating dialogues that attract the audience. Otherwise, your summary gives a good insight into a story.
PAGE LAYOUT: 8/10
Fair length of the chapters and the paragraphs. It is an easy read and has nothing complex that can confuse a reader. The book appears neat and tidy. try to add some question at the end of chapters to hook reader furthermore.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 8/10
Doesn't consist of various characters but you have done a good job with all that you have employed. Precisely described. The imagination falls appropriately without confusions. Also, at the end, when you disclose about Luc being a part of the plan is an unexpected and great way to put it all together.
GRAMMAR/ VOCABULARY/SPELLING: 7/10
The choice of words, articles are all carefully used. But there are few errors, In chapter 3, 'anger for being stuck in this horrible place'; sounds better than 'anger at being' Usage of brackets seems unnecessary better avoid them. There are a few punctuation errors. In chapters 4, Some sentences need to rephrase, for instance, ' Y... You remember who am I?" instead of 'who I am?' In the following sentence, 'that shouldn't be possible,' I experienced bit cracked readability maybe make it simple by rephrasing it 'that's unlikely,' or maybe you could use a more powerful vocabulary.
COMMUNICATION WITH THE READER: 1/5
Try to reply to comments left by your readers and try to grab their attention, it helps to pin them in the story.
GENERAL SATISFACTION: 12/15
The story keeps the curiosity alive. But after a few chapters, it may get a little boring if one doesn't plan to stick and complete the book. The pace your story follows is smooth. It is not a genre everybody likes to read but for the person, the genre holds the value will surely like the content and the way it is presented.
TOTAL 51/80
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