𝑨𝒗𝒏𝒆𝒊𝒍 𝑶𝒔 (On Hold)

vidyut (part 1)

So I am going to write episode before 10 years leap.

So let's start 🤗

In my story avni is in vidyut's house.She was having the plan to escape but she couldn't. When she saw neil present there.

Vidyut ghar ke bahar aa jata hai aur dekhta hai neil bahar khada hai .
Vidyut: Neil ke pas jake bolta hai bachao pls neil meri avni ko bacha lo main hath jodta hu tumhare samne neil bina kuch kahe andar chala jata hai
Neil's pov
wo dekhta hai ki ghar me puri tarah se aag phail gya hai use avni ki bahut fikr hone lgti hai wo phir darwaza kholne ki jb kosish krta hai tb use pta chalta hai ki darwaza andar se band h

Tabhi dd puri police team ke saath ata hai aur fir brigade ko bulata hai .
DD:mujhe neil sir ko andar jane se rokna hoga andar aag puri tarah se lagi hui h .

Dd phir chilate hue neil ke pas jata hai.
Dd:sir neil sir ruk jayiye andar khatra hai mt jayiye andar .lekin neil kisi ki kaha sunne wala hai .
Dd:shinde meri madad kro neil sir ko andar jane se .
Jb neil andar jane wala hi hota hai tb.dd phir use piche se pakad leta hai
Dd:sir ye aap kya kar rhe ho.
Neil:chod dd mujhe ,mujhe avni ko bachaanaa hai ......avni tum chinta mt kro main aa raha hu tumhein bachane
Dd:sir fire brigade wale aa gye h wo bhabhi ko sahi salamat nikal layenge bahar.
Neil kisi ki ni sunta hai andar chala jata hai sabko push krke.

Neil:avni avniiiii avnii kaha ko avni tum dekho main aa gya hu avniiii kuch to kaho kaha ho..
Neil rota chillata avni ko us aag me dhoond hi rha tha tbhi use kuch awaj sunayi di.
Avni:nei...neil neil main yaha hu neil plss neil bachao mujhe plss bachao...

Tabhi neil ki nazar niche mandap ke pas padhti hai aur wo dekhta hai ki avni behosh ho gyi hai.
Neil:avni avni utho dekho main main aa gya avnii plss utho
Apni aakhein kholo avni plss.
Dd:sirrrrrrrr..

Neil piche mud ke dekhta hai ki uske upar mandap ka pillar gir rha hai .tbhi neil avni ko pakad ke us mandap se niche aa jata hai .

Dd:sir aap aur avni bhabhi thik h na apko chot to ni ayi na.
Neil:haan haan dd main thik hu dekho na avni akhein ni khol rhi h avni utho avnii.
Dd:sir bhabhi ko hospital leke chalte hai .jldii
Tbhi neil avni ko utha kr ke ambulance tk le jata hai .

Tbhi use vidyut rok deta hai .
Vidyut:neil avni avni meri avni kaisi hai ..
Tbhi neil vidyut ko ek slap marta hai .
Neil: meri avni hai wo samjhe meri avni wo avni neil khanna hai samjhe vidyut wo tumhari kbhi ni ho skti .Aur meri avni se dur raho agar use kuch hua na to main tumhein zinda gad dunga samjhe..

Doctor avni ko ambulance me oxygen mask pehnate hai aur tbhi uski  saansein tej ho jati h neil ye dekh ke pareshaan ho jata hai .
Doctor:humein inhe jldi se hospital leke jane hoga ni to inki jan ko khatra ho skta hai .
Tbhi neil dd ambulance mein baith te hai aur avni ko hospital leke jate h.

Hey guys!I wrote it for the first time so plss tell me how the story is and pls support me.
Do vote if u love this and comment nd tell me my mistakes.
So that i can improve myself.