The Social Media Bride | K Elliot

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This is a very messy composition, too busy, probably because of the doubled overlaid picture

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This is a very messy composition, too busy, probably because of the doubled overlaid picture. It's not particularly "bridal", and even if we get that the phone is meant to tie in with the title, it's not working. The title text is difficult to read where it is pink on pink and the author's (Wattpad user)name is cramped at the bottom, crowded by, well, everything.

Fay: "This looks like someone got a hold of a sticker book and was left unsupervised."

Sal: "I do like the font size and style of the title a lot. I think if it's moved further up and only had the flowers (no pink), it could draw eyes in."

Oliver: "Did you know that cell phones could be used as actual phones and not just Instagram camera?"

Fay: "Oliver is from ancient times, he says a lot of very strange and likely untrue things."

The title fits the romance/chicklit genre

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The title fits the romance/chicklit genre. It's not off-putting and sounds like some kind of light romcom, but it's not overly appealing either.

Oliver: "The title screams chicklit, but it got me intrigued as I have no idea about what a social media bride could be. That counts for something."

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