Thank you for reading Be Home Before Sunset, I hope you enjoyed it!
This was my first attempt at writing something like this - I would appreciate any feedback you are willing to share!
Was it at all scary? Creepy? Chilling? At all?
I tried to shy away from actually describing the monsters. What did you see? What did you picture in the woods? (Did this work?)
Did anything not make sense, loose ends etc?
Anything else you would like to add?
Thank you again!
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Be Home Before Sunset
Short StoryUnimaginable monsters lurk in the shadows of the woods surrounding Krissy's house, but she will be safe within those walls... as long as she is always home before sunset. Not for the faint-hearted; this creepy short story is full of suspense! It's a...
