"We stared at each other for five minutes, but then he looked away hastily."
Woah okay. Do these people not blink or something?
I've seen this a lot. There is not track of time in most stories– and it ends up sounding like the quotation above.
It should be this.
"We stared at each other for a few seconds, but then he looked away hastily."
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