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1. how is the story so far?
2. how was the last chapter ?
3. do you guys think I should be more detailed in the sex scenes
5. do you like the direction the story is going in
4. do you guys think the story is getting to long

I hope you answer these questions in the comments it's just to see what I should improve on and even if it's negative feed back I still want it. just be honest and I hope you have a great day

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