when the story has no development and sounds like an elementary book
ex. "I accidentally killed your mom in a car crash." she said.
"what. I hate you now." he said
"I hate you too." she said
"I'm leaving." he said
"don't leave I love you." she said
"bye."
like-?? where's the buildup?? those synonyms that are part of the English language??? do you remember those? or-or maybe the literary idea of suspense and eXPLANATION
i can't even handle it I feel like I'm reading an third grade level book. some shit like "tommy and the grape" where all it does is say "tommy ate the grape. tommy is not hungry anymore. tommy is happy"
**cries forever**
YOU ARE READING
fictional therapy || book help
Randomin which an author lets you know what she finds unattractive in literature featuring famous people NO HATE THIS IS MY OPINION AND IF YOU'RE EASILY OFFENDED I SUGGEST YOU LEAVE NOW [UNDER POSSIBLE EDITING]
