when suddenly first POV becomes third POV
EX; "Wow," I whispered. "They do travel in herds."
John gazed upon the dinosaurs with awe. He just couldn't drag his eyes away from the magnificent creatures.
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING. I WAS A PERSON AND NOW IM WATCHING THE PERSON BEHIND THE FOURTH WALL. WHO AM I, WHAT AM I, WHAT AM I DOING ON THIS EARTH.
but seriously, get your shit together. you shouldn't be writing a book or anything if you can't even keep track of who you're writing about??????
YOU ARE READING
fictional therapy || book help
Randomin which an author lets you know what she finds unattractive in literature featuring famous people NO HATE THIS IS MY OPINION AND IF YOU'RE EASILY OFFENDED I SUGGEST YOU LEAVE NOW [UNDER POSSIBLE EDITING]
