Book: The Reason Untold
By: Je0n_Ny
Judge: Dragon_Kitara
Title: 3/5
Didn’t fully fit your theme. A better name could have been chosen
Cover : 5/10
Make it more eye catching. Your font is messing up your cover, I suggest you change it
Description: 7/10
Needs to be more creative and intriguing
First impression: 5/10
Wasn’t very intriguing as it felt like I was reading a text message not a book. You lacking in creative in this book
Writing style : 5/10
Your short form and dialogue writing is off putting. I don’t mean to discourage the author but I have read your other work which is much better than this. Take out the dialogue writing and be more descriptive. It will boost this book up a lot
Characters action and decisions: 6/10
Some parts didn’t make sense to me, while others were confusing. Be more detailed with their actions and emotions
Plot: 15/20
A common plot outline but there is some originality in it. Write in full words and take the dialogue writing out. Be more descriptive and creative. Add more plot twists and be more descriptive with them. You need to make your characters more realistic and add much more emotions to them
Explanation: 3/5
You need to explains the scenes much more in details. You are lacking in descriptive writing
Sense: 7/10
Some parts were confusing which had me reading over it for a few times
Spelling, grammar and vocabulary: 6/10
You have typos and a few grammar errors. You can work on your vocabulary as well
Total : 62/100
I don’t mean to be harsh and discouraging to the author. Like I said I have read your other work and I know you can make this book into a masterpiece
Judge: StarV07
Title: Should be some other impressive title. 2/5
Cover: Good. 7/10
Description: It should be elaborated but the proverb narrates a lot about the story. 8/10
First impression: Hidden start, nice objective. 10/10
Writing style: Best part. This highlights the ups and downs of the story well developed. 10/10
Characters actions and Decisions : Properly showcased in a logical manner. 8/10
Plot : Impressive plot in a proper expressive manner. 18/20
Explanation: Well explain that's all I can say. 5/5
Sense: Logical, sensible, heart touching. 8/10
Grammer, Spelling & Vocabs: Minor spelling mistake rest all well done. 9/10
Total: 85 /100
Total: 85+62= 162
Average: 73.5
No bonus because you are not following your judges
Grand Total: 73.5
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