Bts Army Awards 2021

✍ Round 2 [One-Shot Elimination]

Plot: 10/20

The plot has potential, but is very poorly executed and rushed. There are too many plotholes and too boring chemistry between the leads. You need to change things. 

And where's chapter 2?

Explanation: 1/5

I don't know what to say. 

Sense: 3/10

I don't know what to say... It made me quite strained reading it with so many punctuation errors. So rushed and emotionless. 

Grammar and vocab: 3/10

Punctuation, lower case and upper case, even spelling mistakes... They are too many. Proofreading is necessary. 

Total: 38/100

Judge: Mae_writes_08

Title: 4/5
Cover: 10/10
Description: 6/10
First Impression: 8/10
Writing style: 8/10
Character's actions and decisions: 8/10 Plot: 20/20
Explanation: 4/5
Sense: 10/10
Grammar, Spelling and Vocabs: 5/10 Total: 83/100

Title- It was good but it would be great if it's like "Vampire's Soulmate" or "Vampire's Queen" git these names as it was mentioned in the first chapter Cover - It was great for meh Description- was great but it must be a lil detailed First impression- the first impression makes the reader to read the book ahead and so first impression was good not less or more

Writing style- It was good to be honest short and good not like long chapters which Reader's find boring Character's actions and decisions- Good! Plot- full marks cuz its always difficult to take up an super natural things to write story so yeah and it was good all together

Explanation- wanted to be clearer

Sense- What else it made some good sense Grammar- All though everything's good I don't appreciate grammar, spelling and vocabulary mistakes it can make the whole sentence go wrong which leads the readers to be confused and don't think I criticise only other writers I criticise myself for further improvements

Total was 83 which was absolutely suitable for the whole story! :)

Total: 38+83=121
Average: 60.5
Bonus: +7
Grand Total: 67.5
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