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Shadowed by Moonlight (Updated) | Wera

Reviewer's Note: Hi Kryssa, thanks so much for requesting me. I wanted to leave a note in the beginning of this chapter so that you are aware that I've marked the sections that I have added or updated to your Bronze Egg tier review. Those that aren't marked are things that remain unchanged and I didn't have any additional comments. Hopefully, this will help streamline what's different from my initial review of your book.

Without further ado, I hope you enjoy this review!

Author: KryssaStevenson

Title of Work: Shadowed by Moonlight

Package: Silver Egg Package (upgraded)

Reviewed: Chapters 1a-c, 2a-c, 3a-c, and 4a

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1 out of 5 [ADDED]

I like the color scheme of the cover, but I don't think it's a good fit for this amazing story! I think you need to incorporate more fantasy elements because it's too realistic at the moment and doesn't allude to what genre the story is! Another thing to keep in mind is using white text on an especially light background. It can make things difficult to read, and the reader needs to be able to see your name and the subtitle!

5 out of 5 [ADDED]

I think this is a good example of a good blurb. You've introduced the character, the stakes are clear, and you also got some good comps to seal the deal. I don't have anything to suggest, I think this captures a lot of relevant information and is a reasonable length. Great job!