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Participants, here are the scores and feedback given by your judge

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Participants, here are the scores and feedback given by your judge. (This is placed in no specific order. Just find your book and username 😊)

Please use this to make your work better. If you didn't win, strive better next time.

Your book will be an Aurum someday. Just work on it 😉


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zyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy's Heart

Judged on: July 2, 2021

Judged by: ARMYaFANofBTS45

Cover (6/7)

The cover is beautiful although I don't see anything related to a hurt.

Title (5/5)

It fits the story perfectly! It's also interesting. Heart a word that the whole story is about but it doesn't spoil it.

Blurb (7/8)

It's really good! The description is perfect for the title! But it kind of seems like missing something. Adding a few lines would be better.

Grammar (13/15)

The grammar is good but I found some mistakes which are probably typos.

Flow (28/30)

The story's pace is not too slow or too fast which is good but I will say some things are a little fast. Other than that everything is good!

Concept (25/25)

I have never read anything like this! The concept of taking someone's heart putting it in someone else to make them live longer I never heard or read anything. This is very unique.

Enjoyment (10/10)

This story is full of twists and turns! From the chapter to the last one, it got me hooked. It's really good and a unique story.

Total (94/100)

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strawberry1d's Serendipity

Judged on: July 2, 2021

Judged by: ARMYaFANofBTS45

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