chapter 7

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Marcus POV:



I suddenly gasp for air and notice my mom standing there, she looks relieved to see me alive


Then she closed the door again


I looked around making sure everything is ok but Rae is still unconscious 


I go up to Rae and start shaking her to get her to wake up but she still hasn't 


"Rae" I say

"Rae please wake up" I say shaking her again

she still doesn't wake up

"Rae please, I can't lose you too" 

she still doesn't wake up

I fell tears drop down my cheek

"Rae" I say laying my head on her

but she still unconscious 


(Rae POV)


I gasp for air, I felt like I couldn't breathe

I notice the oxygen mask on me and Marcus sitting next me looking relieved to see me

I take off the mask and look around noticing Evelyn is here, she smiles at me and I smile back

I looked to see if "little Charlie" awake and he is but still a little sleepy

Then I looked back at Marcus


He is still looking at me and I'm looking at him, not knowing what to say. We haven't really said anything since the kiss and I don't know what to say


Then Marcus says something " Are you ok"

I looked at him "Yeah" I say

Then it went silence again

Then I finally decide to say something that would make me embarrassed to talk about 



"I'm sorry for kissing you" I say hoping my face doesn't turn red


He looks at me then looks away really quickly


Then Evelyn starts to laugh a little 

Then Evelyn starts to laugh a little 

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I wait for him to say something...

"Its ok" he says laughing a little.


"Umm yeah, if it makes you feel any better that was my first kiss, I guess if you count it as it" I say.

"Me too, I guess" He says smiling

It kinda got awkward for a bit but then we have to go signing to safe our breathe and we continue passing the oxygen mask around.


Then Marcus comes up to me and sits next to me 

I looked at him then he looks at me 

I looked at him then he looks at me 

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(something like that)


then he grabs my hand and intertwines it and holds it in his lap and looks forward 

My cheeks start to heat up and I laugh a little and look forward too, but in the corner in my eye I see Marcus smiling which makes me smile.

My cheeks start to heat up and I laugh a little and look forward too, but in the corner in my eye I see Marcus smiling which makes me smile

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AN: OK GUYS THAT THE END OF THIS CHAPTER, BUT I NEED HELP FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. DOES EVELYN GO OUT OF THE TANK AND TRY TO GET SOMETHING? OR DOES SOMETHING ELSE HAPPENED? BECAUSE I REMEMBER THAT ENDING BUT I SWEAR THERE ARE MORE PARTS, SO IF YOU CAN REMEMBER PLEASE TELL SO I CAN WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

HOPED YOU ENJOYED :)

(unedited chapter)

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