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Spelling grammar and vocabulary :- 9/10 Mostly everything is good, there are just a few minor mistakes.
Total :- 77/100
You've got an amazing plot author, but a few paragraphs are too long. Also, i'm sure this story would classify as a Taekook ship story. Sure, it's a Taekook story, but not a ship one, s in this they have a father - son relationship. But it's a good read Nonetheless.
Title :- 2.5/5 Cover :- 2/5 Description :- 6/10 First impression :- 8.5/10 Writing style :- 8/10 Characters actions and decisions :- 6/10 Plot :-18.5/20 Explanation :- 3.5/5 Sense :- 6.5/10 Spelling, Grammar and Vocabulary :- 8/10 Total :- 69.5/100
I loved this book!! I had a really good laugh too!! I really liked the way you wrote, the way you conveyed how the character feels through your writing, it wS so beautiful. And I think we all got an insight on how taking care of a child can be lmao. I loved your use of vocabulary and you had amazing grammar. I loved the transitions from one chapter to another, really it was so beautiful but again every coin has two sides to it, and there is something I really wanted to mention. 1. I saw the cover, and I really felt it gave me a dark vibes. Vibes like this was related to mafia, or something dark, and than after reading this, this was more of fluff and how a carefree and laid back person accepted his responsibilities as a father. I feel that maybe if you change the cover, the readers will get a correct impression of the book. Other than that, I can tell you that you have great potential, and i wish you all the best for the fore endeavours!😄
Total :- 77+69.5=146.5 Average :-73.25 Bonus:-+7 Grand Total :- 80.25
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Book:- Like an arrow in the blue sky another century flies by By:-serendipifics
Review/ Advise: This is a beautiful love story that makes you root for them to be together. i love how even in their next life they still remembered each other and found their way back to one another. At first i felt the title did not fit the book till i read the end. I had trouble now and then telling the difference if he was dreaming or not. I enjoyed this book and looking forward to read more of your work.
