KIM SEOKJIN CATEGORY RESULTS

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Book: Be my cook

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Book: Be my cook

By: Mrs_Namnam

Judge: rabisworld02

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
First impression: 18/20
Plot: 19/20
Flow: 8/10
Emotions: 8/10
Character development: 9/10
Grammar/ vocabulary: 8/10
Overall: 4/5

Total: 88/100

Review: Its a beautiful love story. A unique name and a unique plot. Grammar needs a little improvement. But its good. Keep it up. Well done author.

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Guardian's gift

By: shiteutea

Judge: BlazePR5

Title: 5/5
It matches the plot and is absolutely eye capturing.

Cover: 3/5
The cover could do a little more of work. First of all, Jisoo's image is a bit dark and is a stark contrast to Jin. Moreover, the placement could be changed a bit.

Blurb: 5/5
The blurb is really enticing and gives away the perfect information.

First impression: 18/20
My first impression of the story was completely different because the first chapter was dragged a lot. I could not figure out anything.

Plot: 19/20
The plot is awesome and unique. Definitely something which is perfect for fantasy lovers.

Flow: 9/10
The flow was a bit slow but it caught up after the first chapter.

Emotions: 7/10
The surroundings were described more detailed than the protagonists. There is no fault in this, but try to balance them.

Grammar and vocabulary:10/10
Flawless. Mind teaching me, Wordsworth?

Character development: 8/10
It was not much prominent, but since it's a short story... I can tell it's pretty developed.

Overall opinion: 4/5
The book is a pretty good one for fantasy lovers. I love the plot but try to take my points into consideration.

Total: 87/100

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