SELCOUTH BTS FANFICTION AWARDS 2021. [CLOSED]

PARK JIMIN CATEGORY RESULTS

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CONGRATULATIONS

Judged by akr_2204

Written By:  everydaydreamingxxi

Book:- Blueties and the Beasts

Title:b5/5

Cover: 2.5/5

Blurb: 2.5/5

First Impression: 17/20

Plot: 19/20

Flow:10/10

Grammar and Vocabulary: 18/20

Characters: 9/10

overall: 5/5

Total: 88/100

The book has a unique plot which is very impressive. The title is fit wells bit the cover needs to be improved. Reposition the images and the written content. The first impression may not be good but the book is very nice. Try to reduce the blurb length and make it more mysterious. The story has adventure ,mystery, emotion and humor, one should read it.

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Judged by akr_2204

Book: Melody's Derail

Written by: oddella

Title: 5/5

Cover: 2/5

Blurb: 3/5

First Impression: 16/20

Plot: 15/20

Flow: 8/10

Grammar and Vocabulary: 19/20

Characters: 6/10

Overall: 2/5

Total: 76/100

The book needs to be edited and omitted as well. There is a lot of unnecessary text. They've to work on the cover a lot. Make the image and the theme very clear. Blurb is too long, edit it. Make it short and attractive. Try to adapt different styles of writing it can make the content look alluring. Also add some uniqueness to the plot, it is going in a very typical direction. The characters used are fine but you can improve the emotional description. Overall, it is a fine book to read with lots of drama.

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