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Title :- 2.5/5 Cover:- 8/10 Description:- 9/10 First Impression :- 9/10 Writing style:- 9/10 Characters actions and decisions :- 8/10 Plot:- 17/20 Explanation :- 4/5 Spelling, grammar and vocabulary :- 10/10 Sense :- 10/10
Total:- 86.5/100
Review:- I think that the title is overused and I thought that it'd be the same as the others I've read but I was so wrong. I really loved how the author made Y/N's mom it reminded me of those snobby rich mother's in the movies but she was a b though. However, I think that you made Namjoon and Y/N do it quickly. I mean it'd be nice if you made them know each other more, go on dates and than do it but other than that I loved it all.
Title:- 3/5 Cover :- 8/10 Description :-8.5/10 First impression :- 8.5/10 Writing style :- 6/10 Character action and decisions:- 8.5/10 Plot :- 18/20 Explanation :- 3/5 Sense :- 8/10 Spelling, grammar and vocabulary :- 8.5/10 Total:- 80/100
Review:- A remarkable book written by the author!! I have deep admiration for the author of this story it is written amazingly! Every word, every sentence is written in such a way that I can visualize what is happening and I could feel how the characters were feeling in each situation. The writing style in the book conveyed every emotion of the characters so easily I fell in love with it!! However, there are two sides to a coin and here is one piece of advice I would like to give you as a fellow author.
When I was reading your work I realized that you were writing the story from Namjoon and some from Y/N. What I realized here is you write them in the second person from using "YOU" considering that POVs ate the point of view of a certain person, I think writing Namjoon and other characters POVs except for Y/N ( because that's us) in the first person will avoid confusion. I hope you will understand what I meant to covey and that is it. You have written a terrific book and all the best!
