Naruto Fanfic Reviews

MASTERS OF DECEPTION | uchiha centric

Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that any negative critics I say are not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please for RAMEN' sake, remember you asked us to do this.

First Impressions:

I do not know about other people but before I read the book I often judge it by the cover, title, and description. I know if it looks and sounds good, I usually read it right away. Though I think this might be a given for any avid reader. Your cover is basically the essence in what your story is going to be about in a way. The better the cover, the better the story because it means you are working earnestly for it to be so. The cover of your story is amazing and I can tell you put a lot of effort in it. It really caught my attention! The only problem I had was a bit of the lettering at the top being blurred.

Another way to catch a potential reader's attention is to have a catchy title. A title is precisely like a picture, meaning it can capture a thousand words about the story without giving anything away about the plot. Your title is interesting and it definitely captured my attention and it ties so well with your cover. :)

Writing a description of the story can be rather hard, and I understand completely as a fellow writer myself. You don't want your description to be too lengthy or even too limited. You also don't want to give too much of your story away to the reader either. That being said, I think your description is fine and written well.

Your Story's Plot

I fucking really like what you are writing as this is the first type of plot I have seen so far and I fucking adore it, damn it. Again, I am not a Sasuke fan but I like the concept you have going and like damn I wish I had thought of this. (anime cries)

Your Story's Structure

So far what I have observed, your stories structure is a pretty decent. Your description is on point and you've capture the emotions of the characters well too. I honestly could not find any fault, so go you!

Final Verdict on your story

I'm actually honestly confused why this doesn't have more reads yet and why you needed me to review it. I wish you luck in the future though!

Final words from Crowillow

I know I probably came off relatively rude or harsh, but this is a review and the author consented to it. Also, please remember this is merely my opinion and other readers or writers may not agree with me on it. A review is nothing but free advice sometimes taken and other times not okay. I'm hardly the perfect writer myself, and I can guarantee you I'm learning something new about writing daily.

Cheer's mate!

-Crow