this is a project I spent quite a bit time on, so I'd love to get some critique!
you can give me feedback here or under the chapter you want to talk about.
if you allow me to, i will post some quotes here to make other readers curious.
"I love your writing so much, it's unhealthy." (- _agraphia)
"Ich weiß nicht, ob mir einfach kalt ist, oder ob mir der Satz gerade eine Gänsehaut gemacht hat." (- skrrraa)
"loved every single word" (- tinxcanz)
"FRIGGIN AMAZING!" (- traumgefuehl)
"Das fühlt sich an wie ein echtes Harry Potter Buch, nur viel besser." (- gayshipperin)
"So amazing! I need more!" (- Fuchsjunge)
"amazing!!!! really well written, can't wait for the next chapters" (- anamedya)
"GORGEOUS WRITING STYLE, IT'S LIKE READING A REAL BOOK" (- _agraphia)
"SO TALENTED" (- strawmoony)
"beautiful. i love it" (- Ja4ana)
and to show off with my new professional style cuz i try not to be a chaotic bean anymore.
the ones who write books themselves know how it's like to get comments. each one makes you smile. so don't be afraid of giving me positive or negative feedback!
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FanfictionIn which Scorpius learns to lose, Albus learns to love and Rose learns how to be a side character. --- "wie weit würdest du gehen, um jemanden zu retten, den du liebst?" albus schüttelte den kopf und sah aus dem fenster, als hätte er seinen text ver...
