Well, I can't judge much from just the prologue, but I'll keep reading and see if I like it ^_^
Interesting start. I'll admit that it's not really my sort of story but these sorts of stories are definitely popular right now. :)
Wow this is really cool. I appreciate that your spelling and grammar isn't terrible. Voted!
I like but the only thing I have to say is try showing not telling the story. Other than that, I really do enjoy and your grammar is in line.
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