I sort of like the grammatical errors, it makes it seem as if Leo's English is a bit off because it's not his first language.
Omg are you gonna keep on working on this?! I love this story so much, deffinetly adding it to my favourites! Please please please make another chapter :'C
Wow this is better than I expected it to be.. Really met up to my expectations. Hehe.. :) and also.. DAMN! Longest chapter ever!!! Love it!!
I LOVE UR BOOKS. You are gunna make more like one last chance right... That one can be over :(
Wow! This is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G !!!!! This' only the first chap. but he'll its super long and pretty impressive! :) keep giong!
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| Name | †Giovannie Storm†|
| Location | Florida |
| Birthday | Dec 01 |
| Member Since | Oct 30, 2010 |
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