So I did my best to make chapter 1 sound more like an eight year old.. Honeslty I only changed a few things. My brother is eight, and he knew what every word ment in that chapter, so I think it's fine. If you have any problems with it and you still don't think it sounds like an eight year old, I'm sorry. I've had my brother read it and I'll let my other cousin read it too. So that's all I'm fixing :) . Next chapter should be up within a few days... Keep giving me shipping names! Only two people have given me names, so it would help if you guys could give me more suggestions! Thank you :) and goodnight <3
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Chasing You
FanfictionHarry, Louis, and Sophia have been best friends since elementary school. In middle school, everyone called them the 'Three Musketeers'. Through it all, Harry and Louis have had the same feelings for Sophia. When Sophia develops feelings for one of t...
