After about a miles walk, we came across, Men and woodworks. I couldn't quite make out what they were making, but something they were chopping gave me the shivers...
We watched in horror behind a pile of logs, as men in armour marched past us, the smell of fire and ash put me off this place.
Every so often a tree would fall in the distance..
We had to duck quickly out of sight, because men on horses came out of nowhere very quickly.
" Perhaps this wasn't the best place to come after all" I heard Susan whisper to Peter, in a devastating mess. She never liked the idea of deforestation.
As we watched the horses move further and further away from each other, we decided we better get a move on.
We headed on back to where Lucy saw Aslan. And yes your right I didn't say Lucy claimed to have seen Aslan- because I knew Lucy was telling the truth.
" So, where exactly did you think you saw Aslan?" Peter said, practically saying he didn't believe her. I do hope they realise they are making the same mistake they made a year ago.
" I wish you'd all stop trying to sound like grown ups!" Lucy turned around, a bitter glare in her eyes showed she was serious.
" I didn't think I saw him- I DID see him" She paced over to where Rose was.
" I am an adult!" Trumpkin said, trying to shuck it out of his mind, he hadn't been called an adult.
" It was right over...." And we all suddenly heard a crack, and the ground beneath Lucys feet had given in and fallen.
" AHHHHHH" Lucy screamed as we ran to her.
" Lucyyyy!!!!" Susan shouted, thinking she had fallen into the river.
But as we looked down, thank goodness, Lucy had fallen onto a gap in the cliff dangling over the water.
" Here!" Lucy said in an exasperated voice.
As we made ourselves down to where Lucy was, there turned out to be a pathway zigzagging down the cliff. As we came to the bottom, (at the very end of the river) we stepped over some slippery stones.
" Woah!" Rose tilted to the side on one stone, but I grabbed her waist quickly before she slipped over. It got quite awkward after she smiled and we carried on as normal.
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Telmarines// Edmund Pevensie (#Wattys2016)
Fanfiction(UNDER MAJOR EDITING) " The most dangerous thing you can do is to take any one impulse of your own nature and set it up as the thing you ought to follow at all costs. "- C.S Lewis
