Title: Memories of Passing Strangers
Author: inn3rDork97
Review:
I wasn't expecting poems when I read the title, but anyway, this is quite good. I thought that you wrote this very well, seeing that they flowed very well and etc. However, they were all quite the same. It was all the same concept. I don't understand how your title relates to all the poems in the story.
Critiquing poems are quite hard to do. So, all I really have to say is to maybe have your poems relate to your title...but otherwise, they were very descriptive and intense.
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The Critique
Non-FictionI'm just like the rest of you. A normal person who just loves to write and read. But the thing is, writing can never be perfect and there are many writers out there who want their work to be at least 99.99% amazing. Here I critique stories; I may be...
