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Paralyzed: A New Breed of Mutant Superheroes

Paralyzed: A New Breed of Mutant Superheroes

2.8K Reads 58 Votes 2 Part Story
Rae By Pigtailsx Updated Feb 20, 2011

Holly Dunst has been paralysed since she was four. She wishes that she could move and be like every other normal eighteen year old, and when the chance to take a new drug that will give her back her mobility comes into order, she is quick to take part in the trail. Holly is exultant with the promise of becoming 'normal' again. But will this new drug really make her normal or will it change her in more ways than one?

K_Boss K_Boss Sep 11, 2013
To be honest, I liked it. It's a nice start. Let's see what you come up with. Updaaate!
SaltnSauce SaltnSauce Aug 24, 2012
i think it's a great story and I can't wait to read more it sounds like a story I'd buy on my kindle
Pigtailsx Pigtailsx Jul 06, 2012
                              Oh thank you, I have half a chapter written and college has just finished, I didn't know how demanding my first year would be :s
                              But I have my summer break, so we will see what pops up :o x
pixiedrop pixiedrop Jul 06, 2012
*serious face* Thsi story has such potential. Please update soon. 
                              *not-so-serious face* I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Flower_Misery Flower_Misery Nov 24, 2011
This is pretty good!! I'm certain to be reading the rest... I'm actually writing a mutant story of my own- eept she was born with it and she kinda works for the government..
WeirdIsMyNormality WeirdIsMyNormality Aug 24, 2011
PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!But make sure you don't rush ahead of things. Oh and don't add too much description to what a character is wearing for EVERY chapter. Alot of other writers have made this mistake. Other than that GO HARD =)