Beautifully Broken

17 Part Story 19.8K Reads 450 Votes
DEAnceinthedark By DEAnceinthedark Updated 23 days ago
It's easy to say that you don't care what other people think but it's so hard to play deaf when you're the hot topic of high school gossip. Addie had to learn that lesson the hard way. When the truth spread that she was physically abused by her first love Nate, the whole school didn't believe her. Not being able to take the pressure, she resorted to drastic measures. A year after her failed suicide, she begins college anew promising herself to find real friendships and   to avoid love all together. Till she meets Julian. Will she make real friends this time around? Will Nate ever take his revenge? And as she grows out of her steel shell, what happens when she finds out that Julian is Nate's estranged brother? That is, if she ever finds out.
This sounds like a remix of Cyber Bully hint hint I look the movie and so far I llove this book keep writing and I shall read on when I get the chance tell me if you've seen the movie before :)
This very well written! It's very intense chapter and you finished in the right spot, leaving the reader wanting more! :)
The first chapter, hm, it's nice. :) Will continue reading from my phone! so im stopping here! Voted!!!
I got goosebumps. This is really really good :) I could only read one chapter for now because I've promised others, but I'll definitely come back and read more.
Woah, this is a very nice prologue.  It really makes me want to read on and see what happened to her/why she felt she had to do this.  Nice job :) You had really good descriptions and details, and also good spelling and grammar.  Not really much more to say, congrats on being my second 5/5. :)
Okay, wow. O: 
                                    Short, but a really intense and really gripping prologue. 
                                    If anyone doesn't want to continue reading onwards they're crazy, cause this sounds like an amazing story. Voted! Oh and I noticed you said 'theknife' instead of the knife. Just thought I'd point it out.