Beautifully Broken

Beautifully Broken

17 Part Story 20.2K Reads 453 Votes
DEAnceinthedark By DEAnceinthedark Updated Jul 07, 2015

It's easy to say that you don't care what other people think but it's so hard to play deaf when you're the hot topic of high school gossip. Addie had to learn that lesson the hard way. When the truth spread that she was physically abused by her first love Nate, the whole school didn't believe her. Not being able to take the pressure, she resorted to drastic measures. A year after her failed suicide, she begins college anew promising herself to find real friendships and   to avoid love all together. Till she meets Julian. Will she make real friends this time around? Will Nate ever take his revenge? And as she grows out of her steel shell, what happens when she finds out that Julian is Nate's estranged brother? That is, if she ever finds out.

@TheResistance it's okay, i plan on resuming this story in april because of school. I want to be focused when i write unstead of just rushing to get something posted. Thanks!
@TakiraMaine I've never seen that movie! :) Is it recent? So I can download and watch it and hopefully get more inspiration. :) Thank you and I hope you do keep reading!
@XShinyShinerX Yey! Thank you and I'll appreciate more feedback from you. :)
TakiraMaine TakiraMaine Dec 20, 2011 10:13PM
This sounds like a remix of Cyber Bully hint hint I look the movie and so far I llove this book keep writing and I shall read on when I get the chance tell me if you've seen the movie before :)
LetMeWriteIt LetMeWriteIt Dec 20, 2011 07:49AM
This very well written! It's very intense chapter and you finished in the right spot, leaving the reader wanting more! :)
XShinyShinerX XShinyShinerX Dec 20, 2011 07:43AM
The first chapter, hm, it's nice. :) Will continue reading from my phone! so im stopping here! Voted!!!