Burning Sky

Burning Sky

1.6K Reads 226 Votes 25 Part Story
Veronica Morfi By VeronicaMorfi Updated Feb 18, 2017

Highest Ranking: #57 in Paranormal

Sora Gate has a lot of reasons for not wanting to go back to school. 

Every night, her dreams remind her that she is the culprit behind the fire that destroyed her school. But after a whole summer of keeping her secret, it's time to face her demons. If only she knew who was the guy that pulled her out of the fire, the same guy that knows her secret, the guy with the black eyes. Sora doesn't believe it's a coincidence when the new student in her school, Drake, ends up in her class, and he just so happens to have the same piercing black eyes from her dreams. 

After they touch for the first time, and sparks fly up their arms, Drake starts to stoke Sora, telling her he knows her secret and that he wants to help. But what he thinks he knows and what he reveals to her about himself are going to shake Sora's world to its core. Because Drake comes from a family of dragons, and he believes that Sora is one of them.

Sora thought that burning down her school would be the most stressful experience she had to go through, but that's not the case when a group of dragons is about to come after her. Because Sora is not a dragon. She is something even worse, and everybody wants her dead.

  • action
  • dragons
  • fantasy
  • football
  • friendship
  • romance
  • school
  • soccer
  • supernatural
GoldenHunter0880 GoldenHunter0880 Jan 07, 2016
amazing, the amount of possibilities that could come out, you chose it as a dream, and it definitely made me laugh. i really love this kind of prologue, so visible, fille with imaginations, and definitely painted a vivid image to me! i'm loving it!
JH_style JH_style Dec 02, 2015
First of all I want to say you did it good with all those descriptions. You made a dream feel like real life and I love that. Seriously. Even if it's just a prologue you make readers like me longing for more. Overall it's a really good start to a book I would definitely read.
- - Nov 09, 2015
Now that was an interesting way to put alarm clock cliches in shame. I like how descriptive you've got in the scene. No restraints given, and the scene looks fresh out her memory. Amazing start :)
- - Nov 07, 2015
Wow, this was an amazing chapter! A great start, eager to read more! Very lifelike description, I think it might've happened to her at some point of time? Becau sit sounds very vivid....
Alluringtrapx Alluringtrapx Sep 11, 2015
A great way to start a pro, very action like and catches the readers attention right away. I'm thinking it wasn't a dream but a flashback of something that happened in the past. Your description is formed well and I can't wait to read more.
patheticaesthetic- patheticaesthetic- Aug 10, 2015
Very vivid and descriptive for such a short chapter, I wonder if all of the chapters are as long as the prologue, I hope not. I didn't even think it was a dream until the end.