See what a happens when you a fiesty fun loving girl meets the ice cold captain of squad 10.
I do not own bleach
Or any of the pictures
Why......Why do you have to call him a short brat?.......Haha peace call him 'shorty'
IM TALL OMG FRICK. ARGGHHBHVDJSJLGAUKSULD!!!!!! ((Plz take this in a good way)
I would have been like 'UR MOM' or 'UR ANUS' and then run out of the office, I'm so mature
It's good, but the grammar mistakes make the story hard to understand. Rangiku is how you spell it, other than that I liked your story (:
1. Please fix your grammar and re-read your story.
2. Make sure to look on Google if you do not know how to spell a word
Thats all I need to tell ya :D
In a way I will try to help you by beta reading this. Um just a little bit of grammar here. You forgot the I after may and also I would never use text talk in any story unless you are quoting an actual text, email, status, or something social media within the story.