To Melt a Frozen Heart

To Melt a Frozen Heart

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Evelyn Lensherr is the sister of Erik Lensherr. Like him, she has an amazing mutant ability. As children, they were tortured and experimented on by the cruel Klaus Schmit. Now escaped from that wretched prison, the two are determined to find the man who made their life hell. However, on the way they meet the one and only Charles Xavier. What will happen if Charles starts to fancy Evelyn? Will it ruin the friendship of Charles and Erik? ((I don't own the people, other than Evelyn!))

Interesting way to put her powers rather than just stating them
Cool! I like the ice powers! Mine would be both fire and ice!
That was (I have no words bc it was so... amazing) 2 b honest with ya that was the best first chapter of a fanfic I've read and I have read 40 (don't ask(lol))
The first time I read this, I was looking for a book to read. The second, I was researching.
Skyreth Skyreth Jan 26
This is great! Upvoted ahha, I made my new recent story as well haha
SkasisParadigm SkasisParadigm Apr 01, 2015
Well, you'll be glad to know that it is a long way away from "suck{ing}", as you so flatteringly put it. I loved the chapter - amazing. :)