Dark Age Maiden

Dark Age Maiden

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Tom By tomboylatte Completed

Lady Carina has boldly told her father, lord of the manor, that she will not marry the man he chose for her. Soon, she comes to know the power of love. Is it too late? Enemies assail the fortress, where her family, knights, and peasants fight to keep them out. Their horses and cattle have already been stolen leaving them with little chance for escape.  

Slipping out before dawn, Carina rushes toward the deep forest, hoping to reach the powerful dark knight her father told her about. Unknown to her, there is someone else she will meet in the woods. . .

Uberto coz he gave her a ride, get it? Uber-to? Okay i'll shut up now
You hold a true gift, your writing is amazing. The way you describe it its beautiful. Many times you have to do your own imagining but you do it for us and that is truely incredible. I have only read a little bit but im already in love with the story and the words, if that makes sense
jccworks jccworks Aug 26
Could you please read over my novel, The Grey Marsh? I'd love to get your feedback, as you seem like a really brilliant writer!
If I were in her position, I would really freak out, like seriously... how did that man know you were a lady and that you were all by yourself (or that he was a stalker or a pervert, etc.)???
ScarletArcher1 ScarletArcher1 Dec 09, 2015
The imagery is very vivid, your writing style is spectacular, no grammar mistakes or weak word choices, you are a true author, weaving words to create brilliant stories. Bravo!
mynxxy-me mynxxy-me Dec 08, 2015
The count looks like a pervert... But one never knows. Maybe he sees her mother in her and he loved her once.. stories.. :D