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Dark Age Maiden

Dark Age Maiden

546K Reads 22.2K Votes 52 Part Story
Tom By tomboylatte Completed

Lady Carina has boldly told her father, lord of the manor, that she will not marry the man he chose for her. Soon, she comes to know the power of love. Is it too late? Enemies assail the fortress, where her family, knights, and peasants fight to keep them out. Their horses and cattle have already been stolen leaving them with little chance for escape.  

Slipping out before dawn, Carina rushes toward the deep forest, hoping to reach the powerful dark knight her father told her about. Unknown to her, there is someone else she will meet in the woods. . .

For some reason when I read "Giancarlo" I thought of garlic bread.
IStealYoF00D IStealYoF00D Apr 11, 2016
You hold a true gift, your writing is amazing. The way you describe it its beautiful. Many times you have to do your own imagining but you do it for us and that is truely incredible. I have only read a little bit but im already in love with the story and the words, if that makes sense
jaackgrey jaackgrey Aug 26, 2016
Could you please read over my novel, The Grey Marsh? I'd love to get your feedback, as you seem like a really brilliant writer!
citygirlsp1412 citygirlsp1412 Jan 22, 2016
If I were in her position, I would really freak out, like seriously... how did that man know you were a lady and that you were all by yourself (or that he was a stalker or a pervert, etc.)???
ScarlettArcher1 ScarlettArcher1 Dec 09, 2015
The imagery is very vivid, your writing style is spectacular, no grammar mistakes or weak word choices, you are a true author, weaving words to create brilliant stories. Bravo!
AgnesdeOcampo AgnesdeOcampo Sep 09, 2015
love your cover. intriguing start. the knight might be a head knight of the khight she is seeking in Nice.