Mine Again

Mine Again

361 Reads 11 Votes 4 Part Story
TNR By TabithaTragedy Updated Apr 16, 2011

The shore of Lake Winnipeg is a constant, water lapping at its banks in perfect, unchanging harmony with nature. It's a beautiful place, fantastic for a family vacation.

That's just what the Perry family wanted.

But not a single one of that family of five would return home to the city unchanged.

Not a single one.

  • again
  • chapter
  • love
  • mine
  • sierra
  • summer
  • tony
  • tragedy
  • two
SkriBlerLenZ SkriBlerLenZ Aug 23, 2011
Your first person is very well done, and you give the right amount of words to allow the reader to visualize the scene. 
                              
                              The sudden "beautiful boy" is becoming a little cliche, but the thing with the girl not wanting to go on vacation was a good twist ^^
                              
                              I'm liking it :) *voted*