Virgin Queen

27 Part Story 150K Reads 1.3K Votes
ssammygirl By ssammygirl Updated 3 years ago
This story was set in Feudal England, it centers aound Lisa Beaumont, a young woman born of Lord Abelard and Lady Esa Beaumont, Lisa, a young vibrant young woman is loved by all her father's people, she is smart, witty, caring of the people's needs, spends time with the villagers and the children. Rooms fill with her laughter and hearts warm with her smile. Her mother had hoped she would marry another Baron's son, or afforded the luxury of what she never had...falling in love with the man her own heart chose, not as a pawn in a chess game for power.
    Lisa's life is turned around when she is throw headfirst into a new world all alone, where knowing the difference and choosing between friend and foe, love or country can result in a deadly game of much more than just her own life. 
I love how the description of her appearance  was detailed bout not too much
I love how you explain the first bit of the story like this is what's happening and how it's going to be , for just the first chapter it is the perfect amount to read , this book I realized is very descriptive , and I love that about books , so I LOVE IT , good luck ;) .
wow this was really beautiful! Your imagery is superb, I found myself reading it in my head in a quiet tone when they were sneaking around lol And it must be so sad for her to know her father never truly wanted her, poor thing. But I loved it and I will be picking it back up tonight!
This is really good! I love this time period and you got everything perfectly!
btw could you also read my story and let me know what you think of it, it's not too long yet, it's called Hadassah's Watchman (and it also deals with royalty but in the present time)  :  
this is very good, you capture the language of that time in a very eloquent way, I love stories like this and I'll continue to read this as I see you have a lot of chapters on here.. yey :-)