Toadys_Rainfall
BEFORE YOU READ ‼️‼️‼️
( I apologize if the paragraphs look weird, I wrote all of this on a google doc from a school computer and copy n pasted it all here )
This is my first ever story, and I really do need tons of criticism. I am a 14 year old girl who hopes to make this story really good, I get tons of criticism about how complicated and confusing this story is, so if you have any tips, please just let me know. ( I came up with this story idea when I was 10-11 lmao ) 🙇♀️🙇♀️
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Nikki, a normal girl finds nothing fun to do, she goes to the park with her brother and found this strange cave she had never seen before. She and her brother enters the cave and there's a giant pond in it. Once she jumps into the pond, she's suddenly transported to a different world.