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The new bad boy// Austin Mahone

35 4 0
By Shy_Girl14

Dedicated @Hey_its_Bambi

Plot and Idea: Not much 

Summary: " I know what your biggest fear is now." I whispered to Austin as we lied on the couch.

"Yeah, what is that?" He asked looking down at me.                                                                                    

 " Falling in love."

My Review:  Though you have good spacing you should not have multiple characters speaking in the same paragraph.  Check that you don't rewrite words, also check for mispelled words. Also check for clarity for your readers to understand better. I also did see that you tried being quite descriptive, but you can tone it down a bit.

Rating: 7

Overall: I believe its ok, but i don't know if many people would read thi book as much as others on Wattpad 

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