Dedicated puppyeyes111
Plot and Idea: Sounds cute
Genre: General Fiction
Summary:
"I never wanted to be a spy. I guess in a way, it's not my choice. It just happened."Emily Thompson's life is a dream. With her crazy two best friends, Katie and Abbie, the best high school in the state, and growing up to become a adult. Did I mention that she's also a spy? Yep, life couldn't get any better. But what will happen when she has to fight, not only to save herself, but save her friends and the agency she works for? Will she be able to succeed and stop the man who's causing it all? Or will she fail and die trying?The amazing cover you see was created by -starshine
My Review: Wow you had me hooked from the beginning! I loved how descriptive you were and you didn't have any grammar issues. I also love Totally Spies haha. I think your spacing and paragraphing was used well. Your story flowed well and your tense was perfect. I loved the perspective you wrote from. The story had great depth and I love your main character, the way she pulls you in.
Your story has nothing wrong I could really point out. Nothing stood out in a bad way, so I would keep doing what you're doing. I will definitely become one of your biggest fans in this story!
Rating: 10
Overall: I would recommend this to many!
