WARNING - Beyond this point is the stuff which I haven't yet edited to my satisfaction, ergo it may be slightly confusing in terms of plot and wording and the like.
The edits are changing the characterisation of all characters as well as adjusting the plot. The only reason I'm keeping the draft version up is because my edits will take a while to complete.
I dislike the draft version, I'll say that now, and I cringe at most comments on those chapters. I am well aware it needs improvement and I know what to do, as shown by my recent edits I hope.
- ILLENIS